It's interesting you talk about circling back in your stories; I find myself always wanting to, at least thematically, bookend my vids. I like the closure and the way you can see how the story/vid has grown from when it started. I'm a huge fan of bookending/circling back. And here, I like that it's Fraser realizing what's happened himself, so it's not done necessarily for the reader but for the character. It's a particularly effective use of the technique.
![[community profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/community.png){kind=small}
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
timeasmymeasure
no subject
Date: 2006-11-21 05:16 pm (UTC)It's interesting you talk about circling back in your stories; I find myself always wanting to, at least thematically, bookend my vids. I like the closure and the way you can see how the story/vid has grown from when it started. I'm a huge fan of bookending/circling back. And here, I like that it's Fraser realizing what's happened himself, so it's not done necessarily for the reader but for the character. It's a particularly effective use of the technique.