Oh, wow. I had just finished reading the first bit of this off of thefourthvine's rec, and was really, really wishing more would magically appear, and then--more! Magically appeared!
This is fantastic. Great worldbuilding, or I should say world-fusing, fantastic Ray characterization, a good, well-paced plot, and the end broke my heart and then fixed it again all in two paragraphs. I *loved* this.
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Date: 2007-01-15 12:58 am (UTC)This is fantastic. Great worldbuilding, or I should say world-fusing, fantastic Ray characterization, a good, well-paced plot, and the end broke my heart and then fixed it again all in two paragraphs. I *loved* this.