On a whim, Ray reached out and grabbed the back of Fraser's belt as he passed, pulling him into the curtain's heavy folds.
--was where I started grinning like an idiot, because way-to-go, Ray! and this line here--
"The moving thing, I mean. I'm not bad at it, or so I'm told."
--was what made me fall in love with your Ray, because I just think that understatement is so fuckin' sexy on a man. Actually, the whole device of having them talk about "dancing" rather than *cough* the thing itself is what makes this piece so sexy period. It's a wonderful striptease of a story, curtains and all.
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Date: 2003-05-20 11:09 am (UTC)On a whim, Ray reached out and grabbed the back of Fraser's belt as he passed, pulling him into the curtain's heavy folds.
--was where I started grinning like an idiot, because way-to-go, Ray! and this line here--
"The moving thing, I mean. I'm not bad at it, or so I'm told."
--was what made me fall in love with your Ray, because I just think that understatement is so fuckin' sexy on a man. Actually, the whole device of having them talk about "dancing" rather than *cough* the thing itself is what makes this piece so sexy period. It's a wonderful striptease of a story, curtains and all.