That's very satisfying: Ray's whole life, so vividly textured, in not many words. It's all the little details that make it so good for me - young Stella's cleanness and her shining blonde hair (and Ray missing the tickle of that hair on his face), the fact that the fridge is ugly and green and has a history, Stella using a box as a table, the arctic explorer look... And the sex is hot.
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Date: 2007-07-22 05:48 am (UTC)And the sex is hot.