Date: 2007-07-23 10:44 am (UTC)
This is probably a dumb thing to say, given that it's, you know, the theme, but I love the dancing. We're led to believe on the show that it's Ray's escape (which has always been kind of a stretch for me, since I don't think CKR is that good of a dancer) and here it feels like that, permeated with that floating, disconnected quality. I love how you let him get lost in it.

I also think this is one of the most convincing pieces of read about why Ray would once have loved Stella that doesn't involve a complete change of her personality. They make sense to me here, even though you can already see the hairline fractures.
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