This is excellent. You really showed what the dancing means, what Stella means to Ray through each of these scenes.
Stella. Stella and Ray. Ray and Stella. It makes sense this way. He makes sense this way, all the pieces fitting into place. Ray Kowalski SUCKS at being alone.
They come to a stop, just holding each other. The music is over, has been over for a long time. Wow. Beautifully written. And there's still affection there, and history, and they know each other so well, but the music's over.
One thing doesn't make sense to me - the countdown. What's up with that?
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Date: 2007-08-03 06:17 pm (UTC)Stella. Stella and Ray. Ray and Stella. It makes sense this way. He makes sense this way, all the pieces fitting into place. Ray Kowalski SUCKS at being alone.
They come to a stop, just holding each other. The music is over, has been over for a long time. Wow. Beautifully written. And there's still affection there, and history, and they know each other so well, but the music's over.
One thing doesn't make sense to me - the countdown. What's up with that?