Date: 2007-08-09 06:09 am (UTC)
Oh, Fraser. I admire your dedication to, um, truth. And duty. Yes.

Good thing he had his hat to hang onto! Now I'm picturing the full scenario with Burning Down the House Ray, sort of brash and friendly and a little confused and nervy-suspicious all at once, and it's cracking me up.

(...Oh, are we to infer that he previously checked out RayV?)

Um... not *deliberately*, necessarily! Not in a *prurient* way! But he's had opportunity to observe, and he's an observant person, and... um...

*changes subject* Section headers! can I get your opinion on that? I'm a little bothered that they're not consistent. I feel like the first four or the last four form a set, but "pivotal" and "ultimately" don't go together. But I don't have another word I want to replace pivotal with (I think "basic" was the first version of that, but I changed it for some reason, and it has the same problem.) Did that trip you up, or was it fine?

Am all pleased and stuff.
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