I had to read this through several times because it was so hot, while still holding on to the knife's edge of being sweet. The first two sections were so very stealthy, RayK showing his love by looking through Fraser's dissembly for what it really is: his inability to ask for anything for himself.
When Vecchio shows up he doesn’t even have to talk, because he just looks at Ray, and—Ray knows what Stella-shattered looks like. You have an absolute knack for capturing an image in just a few words. I have mad envy for your talent.
The thought of a Fraser sandwich on the couch made me smile, but then the next line made me stop breathing. Fraser asking permission was so hot. Then RayK has occasion to ask permission. Oh my. I don't think I remembered to breathe again until the last line made me giggle.
I love all three boys and you gave them all just what they needed, together. You rock the house!
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Date: 2007-08-14 04:48 am (UTC)I had to read this through several times because it was so hot, while still holding on to the knife's edge of being sweet. The first two sections were so very stealthy, RayK showing his love by looking through Fraser's dissembly for what it really is: his inability to ask for anything for himself.
When Vecchio shows up he doesn’t even have to talk, because he just looks at Ray, and—Ray knows what Stella-shattered looks like. You have an absolute knack for capturing an image in just a few words. I have mad envy for your talent.
The thought of a Fraser sandwich on the couch made me smile, but then the next line made me stop breathing. Fraser asking permission was so hot. Then RayK has occasion to ask permission. Oh my. I don't think I remembered to breathe again until the last line made me giggle.
I love all three boys and you gave them all just what they needed, together. You rock the house!