Date: 2007-10-16 02:39 pm (UTC)
ext_15621: The Pixel in a paper bag (view_paradise's fraser)
Oh my God, this is too utterly brilliant and fantastic for words!! ::flails all over the place:: I love it! It's so clever and funny and sad and true and... ::chokes on own squee::

Things wot I love most:
- the crushed hope in the first one. Oh, Ray!
- the posthumous parental adages, frayed temper and essence of past mistakes in Fraser's ingredients list.
- Skim the politeness off the sulking and discard. Then warm the sulking over a low heat until it's steaming slightly. Be careful not to let it boil or it will curdle. *snerk*
- Rubbing salt into Ray's wounds. Ow, ow, ow. But something that poor Ray is all too familiar with.
- allowing them each a moment to breathe after squeezing the juice of one moment of realization over each of them. Perfect.
- the list of ingredients in the last one. Awww. Especially half an endearment. Can't have the boys getting too soppy, can we? *g*
- Serves: Each other. Awww. ::sniffles::
- that it can be read as a progression. i.e. Happy Ending!!! Whew! After all the sadistic simmering, crushing, deshelling, use of a meat tenderizer and the like, this came as something of a relief. *g*
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