Date: 2007-10-26 11:16 pm (UTC)
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. That is quite a—dare I say?—romantic end scene. ;) In all seriousness, though, I really enjoyed this; I love the narrative voice, it's so evocative. And I adore the Ray backstory, him learning to fight, and learning the things that are worth fighting for. Very nicely done.
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