Eeep, was that ever hot. And I loved the give-and-take between them, the established-relationship vibe when it's going so well, when they're being what the other needs and it's so working for them. ♥
The beer is cold and rich, and Ray's voice is Ray's voice, and both of them are real and present and sharp in a way nothing else had been all day. He can feel the stretch of homecoming, an unfolding inside, as the pieces he keeps tucked down and tidy for bureaucrats wake up again.
And that I thought was a particularly Fraser-y image, and representative of the overall story. Wonderful! :)
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Date: 2007-11-11 09:07 pm (UTC)The beer is cold and rich, and Ray's voice is Ray's voice, and both of them are real and present and sharp in a way nothing else had been all day. He can feel the stretch of homecoming, an unfolding inside, as the pieces he keeps tucked down and tidy for bureaucrats wake up again.
And that I thought was a particularly Fraser-y image, and representative of the overall story. Wonderful! :)