Date: 2008-07-01 03:01 pm (UTC)
Sage, this was beautiful. Just stunning. The descriptions were so detailed and evocative and perfect, and it really felt like every single word was carefully considered and slotted into the exact right order. You've done such a good job conveying the need and want and desire and hesitancy and fear and arousal Fraser experiences, and you put it all together seamlessly. This is a short but powerful piece, and it is beeee-utiful. Great job, m'dear.
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