Kellie - don't look!

[dsudis.livejournal.com]

With humble apologies, since this is exactly what I was ordered *not* to do when I started watching the episodes Kellie sent me... It's just a drabble-and-a-half! Everybody experiments with those!

This arose directly from watching "Spy vs. Spy" ...



“Did you recommend me?”

... “How did you get this number?”

“Not important. Did you? Answer me.”

“Yeah, okay? I did.”

“Is that some kind of fucking joke to you, giving me this job?”

“Jesus. You should not have called. And no. And it was six--”

“It was the end of your marriage.”

...

“And mine, I think. Stel never said she knew, but I think--”

“Shit. I’m sorry.”

“Yeah, well. Me too.”

“Look, they asked me, okay? No hard feelings?”

“Nah. I hope the showgirls are pretty.”

“Yeah, well I know the Canadians are.”

... “Fuck you.”

“Don’t I wish. Better luck to you.”

“You think?”

“I think it could happen.”

“That’s sweet of you. You change this number, right? It was way too easy to get, and I don’t want anything happening. I’d have to deal with your mother. And your sister. And the Canadians.”

“Yeah, I know. Consider it done.”

Comments

[ajinamoto.livejournal.com]

Okay, I can't remember, just how does Ray know where Vecchio is? What part of the episode is that from?

[katyabaturinsky.livejournal.com]

Lovely job; a great capture of both of their voices and a quick slice-of-life that's just laden with the weight of an unexpectedly shared past. The genuine caring between them is very evident. (Keep disobeying Kellie; we'll just tell her that it's the work of your evil twin or something.)

[cesperanza.livejournal.com]

Oh yeah! I love this! Priceless--wonderful and totally believable, actually. Vecchio's Revenge! (or maybe Vecchio's Gift, who knows?)

[doll-revolution.livejournal.com]

well, since kellie's not looking, i'll use her glance-time to read this again.

“That’s sweet of you. You change this number, right? It was way too easy to get, and I don’t want anything happening. I’d have to deal with your mother. And your sister. And the Canadians.”

hee hee! so great!

[(Anonymous)]

Okay, I want my tapes back. NOW.

Grrr...

--Kellie

[axiom_of_stripe]

whoop! delightful!

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

I'm a sucker for good dialogue, and this is terrific.

[jenboo.livejournal.com]

Yay!! Ray/Ray phone call! A little history. RayV maybe doing a favor for RayK. They said alot without really saying it.
Excellent dialogue! Whee!!!

[murielperun.livejournal.com]

I like it, I like it! So, what happens next? ;-)

(Thanks to cmshaw for my pretty new logo.)

[lamardeuse.livejournal.com]

Cuuuuuuuuuuute!

[tikiaceae.livejournal.com]

YAY!!!

[beledibabe.livejournal.com]

Wow. So much from so little! God, I love the idea of this... ::shiver:: Oh, man. ::sitting back and gazing at the far wall with glazed eyes::

Whew!

[kist.livejournal.com]

Stop feeding my ever growing fascination with Ray/Ray! (g)

I love the caring behind the bickering. Also, very glad that you're watching the episodes now.

[aerye.livejournal.com]

Damn, this made me happy. Hope you find occasion to wade into the Ray/Ray end of the pool again.

[imkalena.livejournal.com]

“I think it could happen.” *Oh* yeah. *g*

Always wanted to know how Vecchio's marriage dissolved . . . :-)