Ah! That was just right. The structure and the pace and the language all work together perfectly, the whole thing just flows beautifully. For a piece written around explosives, it's very calm. And Ray and Fraser really sound like Ray and Fraser. I should be a bit more coherent, but I really need to go and read this again right now.
ps there's a typo in 'How to identify...' - He'd shown Ray the contact
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Date: 2008-09-01 09:15 pm (UTC)I should be a bit more coherent, but I really need to go and read this again right now.
ps there's a typo in 'How to identify...' - He'd shown Ray the contact