Ray and Fraser are so perfectly and beautifully characterized throughout this, both as themselves and as women.
She'd been watching Ray's face, the slight pinch between her eyes as she looked through the windshield at nothing in particular, and thinking about how she'd like to give Ray an orgasm. A gift.
I adore that bit because it characterizes the story so well: lovely and loving and occasionally fucking hysterical.
Great work! Loved the lists. Loved RayK. Loved Ray and Fraser. Loved that Ray's crazy shirts now make sense to me. Loved the crushing nature of the Victoria section. Loved Ray breaking through Fraser's Fraserness to get a happy ending.
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Date: 2008-09-06 04:44 pm (UTC)She'd been watching Ray's face, the slight pinch between her eyes as she looked through the windshield at nothing in particular, and thinking about how she'd like to give Ray an orgasm. A gift.
I adore that bit because it characterizes the story so well: lovely and loving and occasionally fucking hysterical.
Great work! Loved the lists. Loved RayK. Loved Ray and Fraser. Loved that Ray's crazy shirts now make sense to me. Loved the crushing nature of the Victoria section. Loved Ray breaking through Fraser's Fraserness to get a happy ending.