I enjoyed the shifting POV a lot, and the way that you made it easy to remember who we were reading at any given time, as they were so true to them selves.
I love stories where we have to peace the past together from the bits we get, and you did this so well.
I was interrupted many times while I was trying to read this, which made me sad, as it lost a bit of power because of that. I very much look forward to when I get to read this again, hopefully when I am alone.
I loved their family, and I loved the story. Thank you for writing it.
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Date: 2008-09-06 08:03 am (UTC)I enjoyed the shifting POV a lot, and the way that you made it easy to remember who we were reading at any given time, as they were so true to them selves.
I love stories where we have to peace the past together from the bits we get, and you did this so well.
I was interrupted many times while I was trying to read this, which made me sad, as it lost a bit of power because of that. I very much look forward to when I get to read this again, hopefully when I am alone.
I loved their family, and I loved the story. Thank you for writing it.