Date: 2008-09-06 03:46 pm (UTC)
I loved the dream logic, it is wonderfully strange and, well, dream like.

I also loved the fact that Ray was at first reticent to the kiss in the dream, but then it was Fraser who had trouble with it in real life. So like them that Fraser would be willing to make the first move when it doesn't count, but that Ray is the one ready to pursue it when it does.

And the way that the dreams were spilling into real life until it led to the ending. Which was so unexpected and just perfect.

I can't wait till I have time to read this again, so that I can pick up all the things that I know I missed.
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