The banter! Oh, the banter. And the hijinks! “Don’t forget the possibility that it was a yellow Mini Cooper driven by two exceedingly tall women.” ::hugs your dialogue and takes it home and names it George:: The "Why we don't lick the evidence" rant! Hee!
Great pacing, so fast-moving and snappy -- boom-boom-boom, and then the ending went thud, which was perfect.
I think I had more to say, but I'm just going to be over here instead, rereading the banter. “Well, not the part about the igloo and the small creatures,” Fraser said, resisting the urge to pull at his collar, “but the basic idea certainly holds up.” \o/ \o/ \o/ (And the Russian judge gives it a ten.)
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Date: 2008-09-11 02:38 pm (UTC)Great pacing, so fast-moving and snappy -- boom-boom-boom, and then the ending went thud, which was perfect.
I think I had more to say, but I'm just going to be over here instead, rereading the banter. “Well, not the part about the igloo and the small creatures,” Fraser said, resisting the urge to pull at his collar, “but the basic idea certainly holds up.” \o/ \o/ \o/ (And the Russian judge gives it a ten.)