This was so perfect! I loved the general setup, and the kind of relationship they have, and all the little details you put in there:
Vecchio ran a yellow light and shrugged.
They ended up doing a muted version of the crazy spaz cop/scary Mafia cop routine, which meant Ray got angry and jittery while Vecchio got cold and polite, and their thief confessed to everything in about five minutes flat.
probably only the chili pepper lights were on.
and beamed down stupidly at the half-sliced zucchini.
all of them only just audible over the music
Thank you so much for sharing this. I'm going to bed now; and I'm very sure I'll have the sweetest dreams tonight. <3
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Date: 2009-08-16 11:15 pm (UTC)Vecchio ran a yellow light and shrugged.
They ended up doing a muted version of the crazy spaz cop/scary Mafia cop routine, which meant Ray got angry and jittery while Vecchio got cold and polite, and their thief confessed to everything in about five minutes flat.
probably only the chili pepper lights were on.
and beamed down stupidly at the half-sliced zucchini.
all of them only just audible over the music
Thank you so much for sharing this. I'm going to bed now; and I'm very sure I'll have the sweetest dreams tonight. <3