Eee, this is delightful and made me grin so much! There's a kind of zing in your writing that I really love. You should write MOAR. *greedy*
Like, I love these lines:
"Yeah? You been obsessin' about my hair a lot there, Benton buddy?"
"No," Fraser protested hotly, as though Ray had just accused him of sliding down the consulate banister in his underwear. "No, I have not, why would I obsess over your hair, Ray? What a ridiculous--"
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Date: 2010-03-05 11:30 am (UTC)Like, I love these lines:
"Yeah? You been obsessin' about my hair a lot there, Benton buddy?"
"No," Fraser protested hotly, as though Ray had just accused him of sliding down the consulate banister in his underwear. "No, I have not, why would I obsess over your hair, Ray? What a ridiculous--"
Fraser, you are busted!