Chiming in late with the kudos, because I just got home and had a chance to read it, but *damn*, woman! I don't ever want to hear you dissing yourself and your writing talent again!
First of all, this was a hoot! Very funny with the type of situational humor that I adore, as well as Ray's interior monologue -- he's got such a skewed vision that I love seeing in stories.
Second of all, it was damn sexy! Oh, the fact that *Ray's* doing the licking... there, and that Fraser's totally overcome by that thought (as am I), simply melts my bones.
Third of all... there is no third. ;>
Don't worry about the words -- you can have my leftovers -- and besides, Ces isn't that anal. At least, not about words. Heh.
So. Got another story for me to read? ::hopeful look::
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Date: 2003-06-07 12:56 pm (UTC)First of all, this was a hoot! Very funny with the type of situational humor that I adore, as well as Ray's interior monologue -- he's got such a skewed vision that I love seeing in stories.
Second of all, it was damn sexy! Oh, the fact that *Ray's* doing the licking... there, and that Fraser's totally overcome by that thought (as am I), simply melts my bones.
Third of all... there is no third. ;>
Don't worry about the words -- you can have my leftovers -- and besides, Ces isn't that anal. At least, not about words. Heh.
So. Got another story for me to read? ::hopeful look::