Taggging along with everyone else in the 'fantastic,' 'excellent' praise department! Vivid images, perfect for the characters, and you make wonderful use of little bits of business: the pen clicks, Fraser trying not to straighten the edge of the paper, all that made this such a rich story.
My fav line?
Fraser treated Dief the way Ray's older brother David had treated Ray. But with less punching.
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Date: 2003-06-22 07:01 am (UTC)My fav line?
Fraser treated Dief the way Ray's older brother David had treated Ray. But with less punching.
LOL!