Lemme comment on both parts here. Let's see. Oh yeah: GUH WHUH Now that that's out of the way, this is fanfuckingtastic, and I don't care if you wrote the second part in an hour or a week, because it's the perfect companion piece to the first half. What struck me, besides the much-commented-upon similarity in how both Rays approach danger, is how Vecchio thinks he's the "normal" guy in a Freak/Semi-Freak/Normal Guy partnership. That just made me smile, since what follows is an incredibly hot scene in which he seems pretty happy to participate. Meanwhile, Fraser is lobbing bombs with his usual unflappable calm, and Kowalski is saving Vecchio's life by kissing him. Sounds like a trio of freaks to me, and I loved it, loved it to pieces.
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Date: 2003-07-18 11:24 am (UTC)GUH
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Now that that's out of the way, this is fanfuckingtastic, and I don't care if you wrote the second part in an hour or a week, because it's the perfect companion piece to the first half. What struck me, besides the much-commented-upon similarity in how both Rays approach danger, is how Vecchio thinks he's the "normal" guy in a Freak/Semi-Freak/Normal Guy partnership. That just made me smile, since what follows is an incredibly hot scene in which he seems pretty happy to participate. Meanwhile, Fraser is lobbing bombs with his usual unflappable calm, and Kowalski is saving Vecchio's life by kissing him. Sounds like a trio of freaks to me, and I loved it, loved it to pieces.