Date: 2003-07-21 02:43 pm (UTC)
He doesn't know what to do with his tongue.
I love you so much.

But he's never felt incompetent like this before, not since he was a young boy trying to live up to his father's standards.
I was wondering when this would come up.

He's a Mountie, after all; he doesn't know how to fail.
I'm not sure whether to laugh or cry. Cry, I think.

he realises that Ray has a lot to teach him, about both acceptance and fellatio.
I ::heart:: this line.

This was a perfect challange reponse, BTW. And much sweeter than I was expecting. Go you!
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