um, hi

[axiom_of_stripe]

i see that, once again, ces brings the crack. one hundred word drafts can be hidden in computer code so that it looks like i'm working when someone walks up behind me, y'know. i like doing the exactly-one-hundred-words thing.

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Voyeurism Drabble: Puppy Love

The wolf had watched. Ben only realized it when he turned his head afterward to press his heated cheek against his pillowcase, and he stared into wild eyes for several breaths before he heard the cub's laughter. Steve had said something earlier about "your puppy" -- he'd interrupted, "wolf cub, really," -- but he'd had his ankles braced on Steve's shoulders and Steve had been fucking him so exquisitely that he just couldn't listen to what Steve was saying about his foundling.

"You'll understand this sort of thing when you're older," Ben told the snickering cub, but it didn't help.

Comments

[mei-x.livejournal.com]

Heh. I love this one. Very evocative and funny, and this is a great example of the 100 word drabble.

[axiom_of_stripe]

thank you kindly! i'm perhaps excessively fond of using exact numbers of words.... :)

[dsudis.livejournal.com]

Oh, wow! Wonderful! And Fraser, already hearing Dief talking, or at least laughing, to him...

[axiom_of_stripe]

quite a mouth on that puppy, eh? ;)

[dracostella.livejournal.com]

"You'll understand this sort of thing when you're older," Ben told the snickering cub, but it didn't help.

ROFL!

This is great! *snickers some more*

[axiom_of_stripe]

always glad to bring the fun!

[aerye.livejournal.com]

Fucking in 100 words - I bow to your superior skill. ::g::

Of course I also like Steve - Steve doesn't really get out of the closet enough, in my opinion - and the image of Fraser, all hot and sweaty and bottom boyish, pausing to clarify Dief's lineage? Lovely, lovely, lovely.

[axiom_of_stripe]

well, just image what dief might have said if fraser hadn't respected his heritage! ;)

[cesperanza.livejournal.com]

Dude.

LOL--just. DUDE. Wow. This is how you do it. This is just how you do it. This is the way that it gets done.

[axiom_of_stripe]

this is the way the addiction sets in....

[spacebrat.livejournal.com]

I agree with Ces because man, that is how it is done. This is so awesome. Laugh-at-Fraser-out-loud awesome. Two very happy thumbs up from this corner!

[axiom_of_stripe]

thank you kindly!

[maubast.livejournal.com]

Mmm nice!

[axiom_of_stripe]

::bows::

[the-star-fish.livejournal.com]

Happysigh. Ben'n'Steve4evah!! No, wait ... hmmmm.

But he'd had his ankles braced on Steve's shoulders and Steve had been fucking him so exquisitely

Very, very nice. Exquisite indeed.

[axiom_of_stripe]

Ben'n'Steve4evah!! No, wait ... hmmmm.

heh. you never know.... ;)

To borrow a phrase...

[(Anonymous)]

I'm not worthy!!

I laughed, I drooled. There's so much in that 100 words. You rock!! *shiver* Young Fraser with his ankles on a guy's shoulders...oy, what a picture!

JennyB.

Re: To borrow a phrase...

[axiom_of_stripe]

thank you, thank you, it's all in the wrists.... ;)

[kist.livejournal.com]

Holy cow, there's a lot going on in these 100 words!

>"You'll understand this sort of thing when you're older," Ben told the snickering cub, but it didn't help.<

Bwah!! Hot and hilarious, and smart. Just...wow.

[axiom_of_stripe]

thank you kindly!

lovely!

[thermidor.livejournal.com]

Nice to see you writing again! Yay for net access!

That was great!

Re: lovely!

[axiom_of_stripe]

yay for the net! :) it's so good to have a writing outlet again.... i suppose you've noticed that by now, eh?

[laurakaye.livejournal.com]

You should leave them there, in the comments, for future developers' entertainment.

[axiom_of_stripe]

i wish i could....

[taylor-serenil.livejournal.com]

Yeah for slash at work! And it *would* be twistedly amusing to leave the drabbles in as comments, especially if they're going to be this cool.

[axiom_of_stripe]

yay for cool slash at work, but also yay for keeping my job! ;)

[foreverdirt.livejournal.com]

That is good crack. And wow, I make that an average of just over two punches packed per line.

I'll just sit here, being in awe for a while.

[axiom_of_stripe]

That is good crack. And wow, I make that an average of just over two punches packed per line.

wham-bam!

I'll just sit here, being in awe for a while.

thank you, ma'am!

::grin::

[laurakaye.livejournal.com]

BWAAA!

[axiom_of_stripe]

*mwah*

[axiom_of_stripe]

language? we don't need no steeekin' language! ;)

Re: um. hi

[yeungmaisu.livejournal.com]

This is amazing, honey; great sex, the start of Ben and Dief's dialog and bawdy, keeping in character humor. I loved it. :)

Re: um. hi

[axiom_of_stripe]

thank you, thank you, thank you! :)

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

Never been much of a drabble fan, but THIS might just make me convert. Smart, sexy, funny. The works. Brava!

SHAY

[axiom_of_stripe]

we'll get you, my pretty, and your little drabbles too! ;)

[axiom_of_stripe]

mmm, ankles. ;) thank you kindly!