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Well, since I finally have a bit of time again, why don't I throw my hat in? Or, return my hat to the ring. Or something. Look! Sheep!

About 430 words. Is it NC-17? Does the common guernsey moo? I'm not really sure what prompted this.




"The thing is," Ray said in a shaky voice, "I'm still in love with Stella."

Fraser nodded gravely and pushed Ray's head to the side so he could apply his lips and tongue to Ray's neck.

"And I know there've been women since then, but you've gotta admit they all looked kinda like her," Ray continued.

Fraser made a sound of agreement in his throat, letting Ray know that he was still paying attention.

"And see, that's the thing, is Stella's really the only person who's ever really done it for me, and I still think--" Ray paused to swallow while Fraser's tongue travelled gently over his adam's apple, "that she and me, we belong together."

Fraser nodded again and began to unbutton Ray's shirt.

"Plus, you know, I'm straight. So even if I was attracted to anyone other than Stella or Stella-type people, it wouldn't be to guys."

"I understand," Fraser said, and applied himself with intense focus to Ray's nipples.

Ray didn't say anything more for a few minutes, until Fraser lifted his head and began to undo Ray's pants.

"Plus, it just wouldn't work. Cause I just wouldn't be able to... you know. I just couldn't."

Fraser made another agreement noise, but his eyes were on his hands, which were extracting Ray's erection from his boxers.

"And also, the stuff that guys do together? I mean, people got the right to do whatever they want, you know? I don't judge, it just ain't my thing. I mean, but it's kind of disgusting, you know? Like, touching another guy's dick? Uck."

"Indeed," Fraser replied, stroking his fingers gently over Ray's cock and watching it twitch.

"Oh! God," Ray muttered, his eyelids fluttering closed and his body arcing forward. Through effort of will, he dragged his eyes open and tried again.

"Uh, Fraser."

"Yes, Ray?" Fraser continued to twirl the tips of his fingers over the head of Ray's cock.

"Look at me, Fraser."

Fraser did.

"You hear what I'm saying? I'm not gay. Plus, I could never get it up for a guy. Cause Stella and me, we're meant for each other, so how could I possibly ever go for anybody else?"

Fraser's fingers slowed and then stopped, and he began to look uncertain for the first time since Ray had leaned across him to get the remote and suddenly bumped lips with him. "I... I do hear you, Ray."

"Good! So, we're on the same page. That's good. Great. Then, uh, you wanna get back to what you were doing? Cause afterwards I think I really wanna give you a blow job."

Date: 2003-08-20 04:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] imkalena.livejournal.com
Too funny! I'm off to bed with a smile.:)

Date: 2003-08-20 06:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mergatrude.livejournal.com
Weird fluff of the best kind! I'm suddenly reminded of Jim Trott from 'The Vicar of Dibley' - No, no, no, no, no, yes! But much more luscious, of course.
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Date: 2003-08-20 10:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chesamus.livejournal.com
I've never, I can't, I won't, Oh sweet mystery of life at last I found you! Liked it lots!

Date: 2003-08-20 08:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chesamus.livejournal.com
Did you ever notice that in the scene where he's finishing the preliminary surgery, he's wearing a thimble?

Date: 2003-08-20 11:50 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] lamardeuse.livejournal.com
"I understand," Fraser said, and applied himself with intense focus to Ray's nipples.

Ray didn't say anything more for a few minutes, until Fraser lifted his head and began to undo Ray's pants.


::snerk::

Great use of the "hey, I'm not THAT way" lie.

Date: 2003-08-20 12:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stinkybubbles.livejournal.com
Methinks he doth protest too much.
Very nice.

Date: 2003-08-20 03:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ozsaur.livejournal.com
Love everything but especially the last two lines. Wonderful!
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Date: 2003-08-20 03:18 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] daughtershade.livejournal.com
Well Fraser's a cop he goes by the, um, physical evidence. Good thing too. Funny, liked it lots.

Date: 2003-08-20 03:37 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] akite.livejournal.com
::snicker:: Oh the lies people tell themselves.

Date: 2003-08-20 07:37 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] shayheyred.livejournal.com
Excellent choice for this challenge, The Big Lie. And the way Fraser just keeps on keepin' on is wonderful.

Date: 2003-08-20 10:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unoriginal-liz.livejournal.com
Very funny! Tell it like it ain't, Ray.

Liz

Date: 2003-08-21 06:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wildmachinery.livejournal.com
"The thing is," Ray said in a shaky voice, "I'm still in love with Stella."

Fraser nodded gravely and pushed Ray's head to the side so he could apply his lips and tongue to Ray's neck.


Your Fraser was spot-on. Loved this muchness. Thank you kindly. :-)

-mercy

Date: 2003-08-21 06:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cesperanza.livejournal.com
I loved this too, and you had me with the same lines, right at the top. Dramatic irony is a wonderful wonderful thing!

Date: 2003-08-27 07:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brooklinegirl.livejournal.com
This is so very amusing. Love the steady progression here, Ray's words and Fraser's actions, and it all connects in the end. Great dialogue!

Date: 2003-08-28 05:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] askye.livejournal.com
This is a great story, funny, sweet, sexy, hot.

I really like Stella or Stella-type people

and this: Cause I just wouldn't be able to... you know. I just couldn't."

Fraser made another agreement noise, but his eyes were on his hands, which were extracting Ray's erection from his boxers


Ray's protesting and his body's already with the program.

Date: 2003-09-05 12:29 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] dsudis.livejournal.com
(Chiming in way, way late...) This was lovely! And I'm so glad Ray didn't believe his own lies either...

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