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ds_flashfictionThis is my very first go at writing smut. All I have to say is: Damn, you people make it look easy.
Ray’s ass was stuck to the shower wall.
This was perfectly okey-dokey, because Fraser’s mouth was stuck on Ray’s dick, and his ass was perfectly willing to wait its turn. He writhed against the wall, and Fraser slipped his hands up Ray’s thighs, spreading them apart and holding them still. Ok, not that willing. He squirmed up against the tile, shivering as the water dripped off his hair and down his stomach.
Fraser leaned in and took him deeper, licking and sucking even harder. Ray was consumed with desire, all sensation leaving his limbs and pooling in his groin. His knees buckled and his head hit the wall. “Ow!”
Fraser immediately released him and stood up, expertly checking his head for bumps. “Ray? Are you all right?”
“Yeah, I’m fine. Just got a little caught up.” He pushed Fraser back against the opposite wall. “There’s no need to be polite.” He grabbed Fraser’s hips, sliding his thumbs up and down his hipbones.
“Well, if ah! You’re okay, then I’ll just…”
“Then again, you’re always telling me that it only takes an extra second to be courteous.” He pressed his mouth against Fraser’s temple. “I think it’s more courteous to take turns.”
Ray pushed up against him, slip-sliding his cock against Fraser’s. Fraser groaned and tried to push back against him, but Ray held him in place. He licked a few droplets of water from Fraser’s lips, and then leaned in for a kiss. Fraser might have the talented tongue when it came to tasting dirt, but Ray had logged in years of makeout sessions on his parents’ couch. He kissed Fraser slowly, deeply, concentrating on the feel of his tongue and lips. He was lost in the sensation, focused completely on the wet heat of Fraser’s mouth. He had no idea how long they were there, with their mouths fused and the water pounding around them. He was so focused, in fact, that he didn’t realize how close to the edge he was. When reality decided to come back for a visit, his cock ached and he could feel the familiar tingling moving up his thighs and into his gut.
Fraser was shaking and moaning beneath him. He was thrusting madly against Ray, trying to create friction on the slick surface of his body. Ray wrapped his hand around Fraser’s cock and let him let go. A few short thrusts and Fraser gasped, shuddering and coming all over both of them. Ray sucked in a deep breath, willing himself not to follow. He wanted all of Fraser’s attention when he came. He didn’t want it to be an afterthought.
Fraser shifted and kissed him. “That was certainly very courteous of you, Ray.” Suddenly, he flipped Ray around and pressed him against the tile, spreading his thighs open wide. “I do believe it’s my turn now.” He kissed the back of Ray’s neck softly, then started licking his way down Ray’s spine. Ray’s hips jerked forward and he braced his hands against the wall. Fraser slid his hands down Ray’s back and onto his ass. “Please,” Ray gasped.
Fraser nipped him gently on his right cheek. “That is the magic word, Ray.” He starting kissing and licking his way down the cleft of Ray’s buttocks. His hands snaked forward and started stroking Ray, as his tongue teased in deeper, closer…”Gah! That’s just… Jesus!” Ray shook, his orgasm building. He pressed his forehead against the tile, moaned, and came so hard that his teeth hurt. He stumbled out of the shower and collapsed on the bathroom floor.
“You have killed me. I am a dead man.”
Fraser turned off the water and stepped out. “That’s just silly, Ray. You’re merely incapacitated.”
“You’re just going to have to leave my incapacitated ass on this floor. The maid can mop me up in the morning.”
Fraser picked up one of the neatly folded towels and started dying himself. “You’ll have to get up earlier than that, I’m afraid. I really don’t want to have to explain your absence from the next seminar to Lieutenant Welsh.” He bent down and started drying Ray.
Ray perked up. “You know what that means?”
“No, what?”
“After all that hard note-taking, we’re going to be filthy. Seminars are very hard work.” He nodded solemnly. “I think we’re gonna need another shower.”
HUGE thanks to![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
bluster for the beta and all her encouragement.
Ray’s ass was stuck to the shower wall.
This was perfectly okey-dokey, because Fraser’s mouth was stuck on Ray’s dick, and his ass was perfectly willing to wait its turn. He writhed against the wall, and Fraser slipped his hands up Ray’s thighs, spreading them apart and holding them still. Ok, not that willing. He squirmed up against the tile, shivering as the water dripped off his hair and down his stomach.
Fraser leaned in and took him deeper, licking and sucking even harder. Ray was consumed with desire, all sensation leaving his limbs and pooling in his groin. His knees buckled and his head hit the wall. “Ow!”
Fraser immediately released him and stood up, expertly checking his head for bumps. “Ray? Are you all right?”
“Yeah, I’m fine. Just got a little caught up.” He pushed Fraser back against the opposite wall. “There’s no need to be polite.” He grabbed Fraser’s hips, sliding his thumbs up and down his hipbones.
“Well, if ah! You’re okay, then I’ll just…”
“Then again, you’re always telling me that it only takes an extra second to be courteous.” He pressed his mouth against Fraser’s temple. “I think it’s more courteous to take turns.”
Ray pushed up against him, slip-sliding his cock against Fraser’s. Fraser groaned and tried to push back against him, but Ray held him in place. He licked a few droplets of water from Fraser’s lips, and then leaned in for a kiss. Fraser might have the talented tongue when it came to tasting dirt, but Ray had logged in years of makeout sessions on his parents’ couch. He kissed Fraser slowly, deeply, concentrating on the feel of his tongue and lips. He was lost in the sensation, focused completely on the wet heat of Fraser’s mouth. He had no idea how long they were there, with their mouths fused and the water pounding around them. He was so focused, in fact, that he didn’t realize how close to the edge he was. When reality decided to come back for a visit, his cock ached and he could feel the familiar tingling moving up his thighs and into his gut.
Fraser was shaking and moaning beneath him. He was thrusting madly against Ray, trying to create friction on the slick surface of his body. Ray wrapped his hand around Fraser’s cock and let him let go. A few short thrusts and Fraser gasped, shuddering and coming all over both of them. Ray sucked in a deep breath, willing himself not to follow. He wanted all of Fraser’s attention when he came. He didn’t want it to be an afterthought.
Fraser shifted and kissed him. “That was certainly very courteous of you, Ray.” Suddenly, he flipped Ray around and pressed him against the tile, spreading his thighs open wide. “I do believe it’s my turn now.” He kissed the back of Ray’s neck softly, then started licking his way down Ray’s spine. Ray’s hips jerked forward and he braced his hands against the wall. Fraser slid his hands down Ray’s back and onto his ass. “Please,” Ray gasped.
Fraser nipped him gently on his right cheek. “That is the magic word, Ray.” He starting kissing and licking his way down the cleft of Ray’s buttocks. His hands snaked forward and started stroking Ray, as his tongue teased in deeper, closer…”Gah! That’s just… Jesus!” Ray shook, his orgasm building. He pressed his forehead against the tile, moaned, and came so hard that his teeth hurt. He stumbled out of the shower and collapsed on the bathroom floor.
“You have killed me. I am a dead man.”
Fraser turned off the water and stepped out. “That’s just silly, Ray. You’re merely incapacitated.”
“You’re just going to have to leave my incapacitated ass on this floor. The maid can mop me up in the morning.”
Fraser picked up one of the neatly folded towels and started dying himself. “You’ll have to get up earlier than that, I’m afraid. I really don’t want to have to explain your absence from the next seminar to Lieutenant Welsh.” He bent down and started drying Ray.
Ray perked up. “You know what that means?”
“No, what?”
“After all that hard note-taking, we’re going to be filthy. Seminars are very hard work.” He nodded solemnly. “I think we’re gonna need another shower.”
HUGE thanks to
bluster for the beta and all her encouragement.
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Date: 2003-09-03 03:57 am (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2003-09-03 04:00 am (UTC)Bwahaha!! A hot, cute little smutlet and a great first smut effort, b - it was worth all the hard work. I think you are now an official member of the Inner Circle of Smut. :)
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Date: 2003-09-03 12:12 pm (UTC)No way! It was incredibly tough to write just this little bit- thank you so much for saying so, though!
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Date: 2003-09-03 04:04 am (UTC)And as you know I liked it a lot.
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Date: 2003-09-03 12:12 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-09-03 04:24 am (UTC)“That’s just silly, Ray. You’re merely incapacitated.”
Hee!
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Date: 2003-09-03 12:14 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-09-03 04:35 am (UTC)Way to go, Smut Woman!!
Except now we all have to go do something about that damned ring together . . . oops! Wrong fandom. ::giggles::
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Date: 2003-09-03 10:41 am (UTC)::snerk:: Great beginning!
Ummm...excuse me? ::raising hand:: Are you telling me this is your first attempt at smut?
YEOWZAH!!!!!!!
'Kay. Let's just say it's, uh, a worthy attempt. Very worthy. Extremely, mind-blowingly worthy.
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Date: 2003-09-03 12:23 pm (UTC)Thank you! I learned from reading all you fabulous smut writers. :bows to lamardeuse:
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Date: 2003-09-03 11:38 am (UTC)::licks lips::
Thanks ever so.
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Date: 2003-09-03 01:13 pm (UTC)Hee, hee! Good smut, way better than my first effort, that's for sure.
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Date: 2003-09-03 02:18 pm (UTC)Ray’s ass was stuck to the shower wall.
This was perfectly okey-dokey, because Fraser’s mouth was stuck on Ray’s dick, and his ass was perfectly willing to wait its turn.
Niiiiiiice!
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Date: 2003-09-03 03:41 pm (UTC)Shiny stuff, indeed. How can I bribe you over to another 'verse, hmmm? It's at least as pretty...
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Date: 2003-09-04 04:18 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-09-03 03:50 pm (UTC)I know! I went to do it the first time, thinking, okay, people do this all the time, it'll be okay. Then I would write a sentence and get stuck. And the sentence itself would suck.
But enough about me. I really liked this. Very hot, playful, affectionate. And it does get easier.
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Date: 2003-09-04 04:23 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-09-03 04:22 pm (UTC)Great job -- loved the humour deftly shuffled in with the sex.
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Date: 2003-09-04 04:36 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-09-03 06:17 pm (UTC)VERY nice.
--Kellie
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Date: 2003-09-04 04:20 am (UTC):bows:
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