Written for the Porn challenge, clocking in at 350 words:). Thanks to
bluster and
justacat for quick beta duty!
God Fraser's ass was tight. Tight and oh so warm and welcoming. The noises that Fraser made drove him out of his mind, guttural groans punctuated with “Yes! Yes! Raaaaaay!”
His pulse was pounding in his ears, Fraser's back hot and warm in front of him, skin slick with sweat. Faint light from outside danced on Fraser's back, muscles rippled as he pushed back whenever Ray pulled out. Sensory overload. Heaven.
To the soundtrack of Fraser moaning. He hadn't thought that Fraser would be such a moaner. Not that he minded.
Being buried in Fraser was the closest he had come to heaven since he and Stella had first slept together. It was infinitely better now than their adolescent fumblings in his basement, praying that his parents wouldn't come downstairs and that they weren't being too loud. They hadn't gotten caught that time.
Ray supposed that they had been drifting apart for years and that he hadn't been smart enough to catch it before it exploded in his face. They still fucked great after the divorce.
But he and Fraser fucked better.
Fraser's cock was hard in his hands, foreskin slipping as Ray jacked him off. He didn't seem to know if he wanted to push against Ray's cock or push forward into Ray's hand. His hypnotic chant of “Ray Ray Ray Ray Ray Ray” told Ray that he was doing something right. Ray was lost in Fraser. He wasn't sure he wanted to be found.
His rhythm stuttered as he felt the familiar lift in his balls that told him he would be coming soon. Push, pull, push, pull, moan. He bit into Fraser's shoulder to stifle his scream as he came.
Fraser hadn't come yet. Ray beat him off, felt the dick in his hand harden even more and then Fraser was coming into his hands, his shout was muffled. He was probably biting on a pillow.
Ray pulled carefully out of Fraser and kissed the bite mark on his shoulder, Fraser smiled sleepily up at him. They kissed for a moment before spooning together and falling asleep.
God Fraser's ass was tight. Tight and oh so warm and welcoming. The noises that Fraser made drove him out of his mind, guttural groans punctuated with “Yes! Yes! Raaaaaay!”
His pulse was pounding in his ears, Fraser's back hot and warm in front of him, skin slick with sweat. Faint light from outside danced on Fraser's back, muscles rippled as he pushed back whenever Ray pulled out. Sensory overload. Heaven.
To the soundtrack of Fraser moaning. He hadn't thought that Fraser would be such a moaner. Not that he minded.
Being buried in Fraser was the closest he had come to heaven since he and Stella had first slept together. It was infinitely better now than their adolescent fumblings in his basement, praying that his parents wouldn't come downstairs and that they weren't being too loud. They hadn't gotten caught that time.
Ray supposed that they had been drifting apart for years and that he hadn't been smart enough to catch it before it exploded in his face. They still fucked great after the divorce.
But he and Fraser fucked better.
Fraser's cock was hard in his hands, foreskin slipping as Ray jacked him off. He didn't seem to know if he wanted to push against Ray's cock or push forward into Ray's hand. His hypnotic chant of “Ray Ray Ray Ray Ray Ray” told Ray that he was doing something right. Ray was lost in Fraser. He wasn't sure he wanted to be found.
His rhythm stuttered as he felt the familiar lift in his balls that told him he would be coming soon. Push, pull, push, pull, moan. He bit into Fraser's shoulder to stifle his scream as he came.
Fraser hadn't come yet. Ray beat him off, felt the dick in his hand harden even more and then Fraser was coming into his hands, his shout was muffled. He was probably biting on a pillow.
Ray pulled carefully out of Fraser and kissed the bite mark on his shoulder, Fraser smiled sleepily up at him. They kissed for a moment before spooning together and falling asleep.
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Date: 2003-09-04 02:17 am (UTC)nice turn of phrase there!
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Date: 2003-09-05 12:13 am (UTC)I bet we could put that on CD and make a mint*g*
It wouldn't be that hard, either. Just record a certain backrub scene from 'Odds'.
I played that scene once for a blindfolded friend and she thought I was having her listen to porn! She keeled over when she learned that those very erotic sounds were coming from the mouth of one Constable Benton Fraser.
At any rate, very, very HOT story! :-)
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Date: 2003-09-05 03:30 am (UTC)Thank you! Glad you thought it was hot:D
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Date: 2003-09-05 03:23 am (UTC)Thank you!
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