Weighing in for the first time...
Sep. 13th, 2003 06:51 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
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And I'm Not Talking About the Park
"So, you're sayin' that you take that one out and the whole damn thing comes crashing down."
"That's right, Ray. For at least two thousand years, builders have known that it's an integral componant of the construction of an arch. It was often the target of siege engines of invading armies. They knew that if they could remove it, they would have a good chance of breaching the enemies' defenses."
"Huh. You... um."
"'I', what, Ray?"
"You know that you're mine, doncha?
"Your what?"
"You're, how'd you put it?, you're the integral componant in the construction of... well, of me. Of my life."
"As are you in mine, Ray."
*****
Yeah, I know I'm a featherweight.
And I'm Not Talking About the Park
"So, you're sayin' that you take that one out and the whole damn thing comes crashing down."
"That's right, Ray. For at least two thousand years, builders have known that it's an integral componant of the construction of an arch. It was often the target of siege engines of invading armies. They knew that if they could remove it, they would have a good chance of breaching the enemies' defenses."
"Huh. You... um."
"'I', what, Ray?"
"You know that you're mine, doncha?
"Your what?"
"You're, how'd you put it?, you're the integral componant in the construction of... well, of me. Of my life."
"As are you in mine, Ray."
*****
Yeah, I know I'm a featherweight.
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Date: 2003-09-13 11:05 pm (UTC)This is the first thing I've posted in about 8 years. I'm starting small and working my way up. *g*
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Date: 2003-09-13 11:15 pm (UTC):D
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Date: 2003-09-13 11:16 pm (UTC)*smooch*
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Date: 2003-09-13 11:21 pm (UTC)*g*
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Date: 2003-09-13 11:27 pm (UTC)Thank you!
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Date: 2003-09-14 02:55 pm (UTC)Oops, wrong fandom. *g*
Thanks for the kind words!
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