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Within the length requirement--and on time, even.



Early Morning
by Speranza

Fraser heard the soft jingle of keys and came awake; Ray was standing at the door, a dark silhouette backlit by the bright hallway. Fraser blinked sleepily, and somehow in that time Ray had managed to remove his raincoat and cross to the other side of their darkened bedroom. Ray's keys clattered as he dropped them onto the bureau, and then there was the soft thud of Ray's gun as he set it down. Fraser watched as Ray wormed his arms out of his holster and gathered and folded the leather straps. He blinked again, and this time when he opened his eyes he could hear the sound of running water, and see Ray bent over the bathroom basin in his white undershirt and boxer shorts. Ray finished washing his face, then moved his dripping hands across the back of his neck before carding his wet fingers through the blond spikes of his hair. Ray shut off the water, straightened up, and reached for a towel. Fraser closed his eyes and opened them onto total blackness; a moment later, he heard the shush of crisp sheets as Ray pulled them back on his side and slid into bed beside him, tucking up close. The bed got instantly warmer. Fraser closed his eyes and hmmed happily to himself.

Ray's arm slid across his chest, tightened. "Sorry to wake you."

"It's all right," Fraser murmured.

"Early morning for you, right?"

"Mmm. The ambassador's plane arrives at seven."

"Sorry," Ray whispered. "Sorry. Go back to sleep."

"Everything all right at the station?"

"Yeah. Just picked up a case last minute. Tell you tomorrow."

New case? Fraser opened one eye. "You're sure?"

"Yeah. Yeah. It's fine," and Ray was already dropping off, which meant that it really was fine; new cases that weren't fine tended to keep Ray up at night. "Go back to sleep," Ray murmured, curling himself tightly around Fraser as was his wont, and as Fraser drifted back into sleep he felt himself smiling. He dreamed of heat.

END

Date: 2003-09-20 11:48 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] lamardeuse.livejournal.com
Ooh, nice. I could see this so well.

Date: 2003-09-21 12:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dirty-diana.livejournal.com
Awwwwww. Sweet but understated. Nice job.

Date: 2003-09-21 01:11 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] akite.livejournal.com
::sigh:: Sweet.

Date: 2003-09-21 01:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chesamus.livejournal.com
The sense of routine, of knowing what eacch small sound or gesture means really comes through. Nice...

Date: 2003-09-21 02:09 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] shayheyred.livejournal.com
A loving relationship, neatly captured.

Date: 2003-09-21 03:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ozsaur.livejournal.com
A lovely little snapshot. Wonderful!

Date: 2003-09-21 04:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jack-pride.livejournal.com
Within the length requirement--and on time, even.

::dies of shock::

::comes back to life to read the fic::

::dies again::

Date: 2003-09-21 04:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jenboo.livejournal.com
mmmmm...sleepy Fraser and tuckered out Ray climbing into bed next to him. They're both lucky men. :o)

A lovely snapshot of life in the Fraser/Kowalski house. *sigh*

Date: 2003-09-21 05:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wildmachinery.livejournal.com
Sweetness. Great job.

-mercy

Aaaah!

Date: 2003-09-21 06:35 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
That was nice.

Brenda

Date: 2003-09-21 06:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xsmoonshine.livejournal.com
Ooh, very nice scene. Sweet and peaceful.

Date: 2003-09-21 03:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tikiaceae.livejournal.com
lovely domestic scene.
lovely. lovely. lovely...

Date: 2003-09-21 03:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sister-wolf.livejournal.com
Lovely and understated. The sweet comfort of two people who are very much in love but also true friends. We need more established relationship fics. Perhaps that could be a challenge? The Old Married Couple challenge. *g*

Date: 2003-09-22 04:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byob-kenobi.livejournal.com
Incredibly sweet, and beautifully executed.

Date: 2003-09-22 02:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stinkybubbles.livejournal.com
The boys all comfy cozy! Very sweet.

Date: 2003-09-22 06:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brooklinegirl.livejournal.com
This was utterly lovely. I love sleepy Fraser, love the glimpses of Ray, so simple yet really fucking tender. This is the sweetest damn thing ever:
a moment later, he heard the shush of crisp sheets as Ray pulled them back on his side and slid into bed beside him, tucking up close. The bed got instantly warmer. Fraser closed his eyes and hmmed happily to himself.

Loved, loved, loved it.

Date: 2003-09-22 07:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shrift.livejournal.com
Oh my, this is a lovely, understated scene of domesticity. I'm in love with the mental image.

Muchas gracias.

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