[identity profile] ajinamoto.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] ds_flashfiction
This is my first DS fanfic, and it's just a little thing that wouldn't get out of my head. It started out as one thing, then developed a life of its own. I hope you like it.

Sincere thanks to Ces for encouraging me to post it.

He looks so innocent, lying there with the light from the street flickering across his chest. It’s as if he hasn’t got a care in the world. The world’s a million miles away. It’s just us. The sex is incredible. He’s just as thoughtful about that, that Boy Scout thing isn’t an act. I make sure he’s satisfied too, oh yeah, he’s satisfied. I can tell by the smile lingering at the corners of his beautiful mouth.

I can see it in his face too, especially now, when he’s sleeping. He loves me, he needs me, and I’ll do whatever I have to to make sure nothing comes between us.

Reluctantly I get out of bed, leaving the warmth of his body. Dief lifts his head briefly to look at me, then goes back to sleep. Slipping on his shirt as I walk into the kitchen I start to clean up.

Yes, nothing and no one will ever come between us again. I know that’s what he wants too, he just doesn’t know how to make it happen.

But I do.
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Date: 2003-04-19 11:36 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] shayheyred.livejournal.com
I make sure he’s satisfied too, oh yeah, he’s satisfied.

Gotta love that part of Ray that can be smug and lovable all at the same time. I really enjoyed this - now go forth and write some more!

SHAY

Date: 2003-04-19 11:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cesperanza.livejournal.com
Heh. Read it again. It's sneakier than that. *giggle*

Date: 2003-04-19 11:50 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] shayheyred.livejournal.com
Sorry - I must not be firing on all my engines today.

Date: 2003-04-19 12:14 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] shayheyred.livejournal.com
Yeah, got it the second time. You got me! I just have Ray on the brain. Huh, like that's something new...

Off to sleep.

Re: Sticking a toe into the water

Date: 2003-04-19 11:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yeungmaisu.livejournal.com
This is Victoria, isn't it?

Date: 2003-04-19 12:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cesperanza.livejournal.com
It looks okay to me.

Re:

Date: 2003-04-19 12:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yeungmaisu.livejournal.com
Sweetie, it looks fine on my screen. So please don't worry about it.

Date: 2003-04-21 07:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurakaye.livejournal.com
oooooooooooooooooh. That one's got a sting in the tail! Delightful.

I love how people are going so many fantastic new directions in these.

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