[identity profile] dracostella.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] ds_flashfiction
I don't usually write sap and sex... (actually, I don't think I have ever written sap and sex...anyway) but this fic was screaming to be written *this* week.

Word count = 996



As soon as Ray got through the door, he felt it-- a soft heaviness in the air--and he let his hand drop from the light switch.

"Fraser?"

"Ray." Ray heard Fraser's voice from the armchair.

"What's wrong?" Ray started toward the armchair the same moment Fraser stood up.

"What's wrong, Fraser?" Ray asked again, tensing.

"Ray, did you listen to the news today?" Fraser's voice was controlled, and Ray stopped three feet away from Fraser.

"No. What happened?"

Fraser reached out slowly and clasped Ray's face in his hand. "Remember the court case we were following?"

Ray's mouth went dry. "Yeah?"

"They won." Fraser's voice was soft, but the two words were deafening.

"Yeah?" Vaguely, Ray felt himself trembling against the stillness of Fraser's hand.

"Yes."

"So, like everything's included this time?" Ray asked. "Not just what-cha-ma-all-it--"

"Yes, Ray. Everything included this time."

"Shit. I didn't think I'd live long enough to see this--" Fraser recoiled his hand slightly, but Ray grabbed on to it in a hurry, "No. No I don't mean that like I don't want to do it. We've been waiting for this. I just didn't think it was going to happen."

"Ray--"

"No, I want to do this, Fraser, just give me a moment." Ray took a deep breath, and swallowed hard.

He wished he had paid more attention to the news so he could have had time to prepare. The last time he did this he planned for a whole month. But this time there were no planning, no surprises, no flowers, no diamonds-- Hell, what did Fraser need a diamond for anyway, the RCMP issued knife cut through most things anyway.

"No, Ray, I have no need for a diamond or any other precious stones," Fraser said and Ray realized that he had been muttering to himself out loud.

"Fraser, I..." Ray swallowed again.

Taking a giant step back, Ray dropped down on one knee. " Fraser, will you... would you... ah...shit."

Fraser kneeled down the floor beside him and said, "If you will have me, Ray." Then, he kissed him.

It was a soft kiss. Warm crackled lips gently pressed against Ray.

"Oh God, Fraser, fucking finally," Ray whispered when Fraser moved back a little. He grabbed Fraser's collar to pull him back and kissed those lips again; darting his tongue inside Fraser's wet mouth, and relishing in the familiar taste.

Though he couldn't see Fraser, he could feel a single streak of cool wetness along Fraser's face, and he pressed closer. Fraser's arms came around him, and they tumbled together to the floor.

Frantically, they pulled at each other's clothes, but when their mouth touched it was with more gentleness than Ray could stand, and Ray felt hot tears gliding down his chin.

By the time they were finally naked against each other, Ray was dizzy with desire and tenderness.

"Fuck me, Fraser."

Fraser stilled against him, and let out a warm breath next to his ear. "Oh Ray."

Without turning on the lights, Fraser retrieved the lube in record time, and came back to Ray's side.

Hazily, Ray heard the lube cap snapping open as Fraser began to softly bite Ray's lips while the tip of Fraser's cock glided lightly back and forth across Ray's stomach. This made Ray so hot that by the time Fraser pressed a finger inside him, Ray was almost surprised by the intrusion.

As Fraser found his prostate and massaged it with ghostly lightness, Ray groaned helplessly. "God, Fraser. I need you... to fuck me."

Fraser's breath quickened at those words; but instead of withdrawing, he inserted a second finger into Ray. And Ray convulsed against Fraser's fingers, but it still wasn't enough.

"Please. Fraser... now...I... Please."

Almost abruptly the fingers left him, and Fraser began to press in with maddening slowness. The warm smoothness of Fraser's cock felt impossibly good at the entrance of Ray's hole, and Ray struggled to pivot his body up, but Fraser used his hands to hold Ray in place.

"Let me," Fraser breathed in his ear, and Ray fought off the urge to impale himself.

"I fucking love you, Fraser," Ray panted.

"And I, you, Ray." Fraser said, moving bit by bit with each word.

God, it was so perfect, so good. Ray tossed his head forward and inhaled against Fraser's neck.

Fraser leaned closer and kissed him again as he began to move steadily. But Fraser moved so gently, so slowly, Ray almost couldn't stand it.

"Fraser... harder... please."

"Shh," Fraser muttered against his lips. "I want this to last."

"Oh God--" Ray closed his eyes and fell into the intimacy of the moment. He could hear both of their labored breaths as Fraser filled him again and again.

"Finally, finally," Fraser whispered.

"Mine," Ray whispered back. "God, I love you so fucking much, Fraser."

Fraser let out a heartbreaking moan at Ray's words. After that, the thrusts came harder and faster. Fraser lifted his hand, and wrapped it around Ray's cock, and Ray managed two thrusts into Fraser's hand before he came, trembling, as he shot all over them both.

Fraser held him tightly through every tremor.

"You too, please, Fraser," Ray said when he found his voice again. But he could hear the rasp in it.

Almost immediately, Fraser started thrusting again in earnest, chanting Ray's name like a litany.

Ray reached up his hand and touched Fraser's face. Fraser pulled Ray's hand over his mouth and stifled his moan against it as he pushed deep into Ray and came.

"Love you, love you," Fraser whispered as he collapsed on top of Ray.

Ray held him until Fraser's breathing evened out.

"Fraser?"

"Hm?"

"I gotta to ask again. Properly." Ray whispered into Fraser's hair.

"My answer's not going to change, Ray."

"Good." Ray crawled out from underneath Fraser, and got on his knee again.

Taking a deep breath, he asked, "Benton Fraser, will you marry me?"

"Yes, Ray."


Date: 2003-10-15 12:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chesamus.livejournal.com
We can only pray that such a day will come for everybody. Sappy, yes, but only the best pure maple sap!

Date: 2003-10-15 12:21 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] suaine.livejournal.com
Aww, fuck, I love that. It actually made me cry around the part where Ray kneels on the floor. I love it.

Date: 2003-10-15 12:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] uselessplayback.livejournal.com
Taking a giant step back, Ray dropped down on one knee. " Fraser, will you... would you... ah...shit."

Ah, with the adorable awkwardness. Yes, today was an good day for this fic.

Date: 2003-10-15 01:09 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] doll-revolution.livejournal.com
the perfect day, the perfect way. . .oh, i do love you, draco-honey!

::kissy::

Date: 2003-10-15 01:59 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] akite.livejournal.com
That was beautiful, Dracostella. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Date: 2003-10-15 02:05 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] shayheyred.livejournal.com
I don't usually write sap and sex
And the Sex-and-Sap combo is bad because exactly why?
You picked an excellent time to start, in my humble opinion.

Date: 2003-10-15 02:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jenboo.livejournal.com
you're right...perfect week for this to be written. And a very promising start with the sap and sex (which is always welcome in my book)!

Date: 2003-10-15 02:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynnmonster.livejournal.com
Fabulous timing for posting this, although the great thing is that it would be a beautiful story anytime.

Date: 2003-10-15 03:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] imkalena.livejournal.com
Loving the Sap 'n Sex! Wouldn't that make a great name for a chain restaurant??

Date: 2003-10-15 04:25 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] shayheyred.livejournal.com
Heh. "Drop on by the 'Sap 'n' Sex!"
Is that part of a chain? Like "Schmoop 'n' Shtupp?"
or "Love 'n' Lust?"

Date: 2003-10-16 05:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wildmachinery.livejournal.com
Oh, the wibble. And the sweetness. I loved this, and it's the perfect week for it. Beautiful job.

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