Kaleidoscope Eyes

[cesperanza.livejournal.com]

Beyond the last minute, but I'm writing as fast as I can, here!!

Ray's Amazing Adventure at the Indigo Club (1557 words)

Comments

[wildmachinery.livejournal.com]

Oh dear ... I can't even quote a piece of it back at you, because it's all so fabulous. The conical hats? The midgets? The room designed by German dolphins? I felt high just reading it. Thank you, Ces, for the most wonderful acid trip in the whole world.

[cesperanza.livejournal.com]

I can't even quote a piece of it back at you, because it's all so fabulous. The conical hats? The midgets? The room designed by German dolphins?

(Ces hides face.) Man, I feel so cheap. What else did I do last night? It's just like a bad bender. And today I have a headache...

[cesperanza.livejournal.com]

Dude, I was hoping we'd get something from you for this thing! I expect to see a drug challenge from you during the Upcoming Holiday Free For All!

[lamardeuse.livejournal.com]

"Yes. And if my admittedly academic knowledge of recreational drugs is correct, I've got at least two more hours of complete," he paused to kiss Ray's mouth, "unaccountability."

Besides the utter delight of the Felliniesque atmosphere, there's this concept--that Fraser knows he's stoned and is going to make the most of it. Fabulous, as always.

[cesperanza.livejournal.com]

Besides the utter delight of the Felliniesque atmosphere,

Hee! Thank you for this! I'm so glad it came off that way, and not, you know. Just nuts. It was distinctly intended as European Avant Garde Nuts.

[lynnmonster.livejournal.com]

WHEEE!

Inadvertent-Club-Kid-Fraser (Who-Is-Definitely-Making-The-Most-Of-It) has raved his way into my heart. And he's *still* dancing with Ray.

[cesperanza.livejournal.com]

He's still dancing with Ray,and the German kid in the hip-waders twirls like a pinwheel--eternally. Thanks for commenting!

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

Delicious.

[cesperanza.livejournal.com]

Burp.

[cesperanza.livejournal.com]

Coke makes you inclined to wallpaper?

Er, no! Ces looks nervously around. Not at all! I made that up! Ha-ha!! Fooled you! (Actually it just makes you PARANOID! HA HA HA!)

[kassrachel.livejournal.com]

Wheee! That was totally delightful. Nothing like a little post-Thanksgiving due South ecstasy fiction to make my day. :-)

I'm not sure I've ever even though of those words in that configuration before, but hey, it works...

[cesperanza.livejournal.com]

post-Thanksgiving due South ecstasy fiction

Hahahah--okay, as Exwood Archivist, I motion that that should be a fiction category! Who's with me?! (crickets chirp) Never mind.

[tazical.livejournal.com]

Watch out, because if I ever meet you on the street some day I am going to kiss you. The midgets...the conical hats... the unaccountability line. Loved it!

[cesperanza.livejournal.com]

Watch out, because if I ever meet you on the street some day I am going to kiss you.

I'll be all puckered up, babe! Can't wait!! Psst--hey world! Writing Flashfic gets you SEX!!!!!

[jenboo.livejournal.com]

oooh! How very David Lynch of you...midgets, funky colored party drinks (blue, mostly *g*).

Kind of the happy flip side of 'The Politics of X'. Fraser knows he's been drugged, is completely aware of the effects, and happily takes advantage of the fact to do something he's always wanted to do. And they're in public, so they really can't go *too* far.
Extra-tactile, uninhibited Fraser...mmmm....Lucky Ray! *g*

[cesperanza.livejournal.com]

Kind of the happy flip side of 'The Politics of X'.

This made me laugh really hard--I think I need to go around and rewrite all the unhappy stories in EVERY fandom. Hell, why not in literature as well?

In my version of Hamlet, Hamlet and Laertes, after wrestling in Ophelia's grave, fall on each other's shoulders and sob, "I love you man!" Then they go to kill Claudius together, after which they decide to open a bed and breakfast in Vermont. What do you think?

(Okay--I can already hear the screams from those people who are arguing that Hamlet/Horatio is the OTP. And I wanted you guys to know I hear you, and you're right. But Hamlet is the Krycek of Shakespeare, ok? He goes with everything--you can do Hamlet/Horatio, Hamlet/Laertes, Hamlet/Fortenbras, Hamlet/Ophelia for the shippers, Hamlet/Yorick for you chanslashers, and I'm pretty sure Basinstoke is working on a Hamlet/skullfucking story, so there.)

[basingstoke.livejournal.com]

SLANDER!

*puts up her dukes*

[jenboo.livejournal.com]

I think Hamlet/Horatio is the only the OTP of the Paul Gross/David Keeley production of Hamlet. *g* From the text you can infer any pairing. It's the actors who create the OTP. ;o)

But I think H&L should open an B&B in Scotland. They could get Macbeth and MacDuff to help run it. *g*

[chesamus.livejournal.com]

OMG the Krycek of Shakespeare! I think I laughed loud enough to scare my fish!

[heuradys.livejournal.com]

Sonderbare deutsche Delphine, die konische Hüte tragen! Köstlich!

Very fun! Love consciously fucked-up Fraser to bits.

Now, if you'll excuse me...



::goes to drop something in Turnbull's Shirley Temple::

[cesperanza.livejournal.com]

Ahahahaha!! Okay, so I went to translate this--Sonderbare deutsche Delphine, die konische Hüte tragen! Köstlich!--and what I get is--

"Strange German dolphins that wear conical hats! Precious! "

--which is, I think, my very very very favorite comment ever!! So thank you!

[akite.livejournal.com]

I'm amazed. And just of what were under the influence when you wrote this? ;)

[cesperanza.livejournal.com]

You know, it would really be reassuring if I could say I was stoned, except I wasn't. Sigh. My brain just normally works like this.

[chesamus.livejournal.com]

Yes, definitely David Lynch - maybe David Lynch on 'ludes. Marvelous!

[cesperanza.livejournal.com]

maybe David Lynch on 'ludes.

That's redundant, isn't it? (And thank you!)

whatever you do...

[theodosia.livejournal.com]

... don't mention the war!!!

Re: whatever you do...

[cesperanza.livejournal.com]

LOLOL. How very true! (Though I found the Germans to be relatively accepting of the war--it's the Austrians who get all glazed over. There's a reason psychoanalysis developed there, is all I'm saying.)

[maj-cliffhanger.livejournal.com]

VBG!!! I loved it! But of course Fraser knows what he's been drugged with - perfectly in character. This kinda reminds me of when he hypnotized everyone in SIB - so of course he'd take advantage of it! LOL! - Janice

[cesperanza.livejournal.com]

This kinda reminds me of when he hypnotized everyone in SIB - so of course he'd take advantage of it!

Oh, oh, I didn't even think of that--but you're so right! Canonical support!! (Ces looks around, points, talking to anyone who will listen.) Look, canonical support!!! Hello?

[resonant8.livejournal.com]

Mmm! You got my funny bone all the way through and my gut with "Why not you?"

[justacat.livejournal.com]

Well, you already know how I feel about this, Ces - but I have to tell you, the German boy in hip waders, twirling like a dervish ... that's one image that won't leave me soon.

Man, how I love your whacky mind! And I hereby give you carte blanche to rewrite the unhappy endings of every single unhappily-ending DS fic out there. You're my hero.

::gazes adoringly at Ces::

[xsmoonshine.livejournal.com]

Hee! The German dolphins sure know how to throw a party! Naughty Fraser. =)

[imkalena.livejournal.com]

justacat is absolutely right!! I think that should be a Flashfic Challenge, too! Rewrite the unhappy endings! Except -- I don't think there are enough of them to go around. And that's a GOOD thing.:)

[byob-kenobi.livejournal.com]

For this, I give you Welsh in a conical hat.

Whereas coke just made you hostile...or really, really inclined to wallpaper, but that was another story.

Bwah! Hysterical, hot and I can (oddly enough) picture every single scene.

[mergatrude.livejournal.com]

Complete unaccountability - it's a very very good thing. So glad Ray went with it! My head is still spinning and I'm not looking forward to coming down ...