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"So you see that's why the people of..." A slight movement made me pause and look across the car. "What, Ray?"

"You just made that up." His eyes had a suspicious gleam in them and a grin threatened to split his face.

Ah. Perhaps the bit about the suspected narwhal smuggling ring had been a bit much. But that meant that Ray had been paying attention for at least the last half hour. I stared out of the window, suppressing a pleased smile of my own.

"You make them all up, don't you Frase?"

"Whatever do you mean, Ray?"

Date: 2003-04-23 10:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mei-x.livejournal.com
I like this, Mergatrude. Fraser's much more sly than he lets on, and Ray's not missing a thing.

Date: 2003-04-28 10:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mergatrude.livejournal.com
Thank you! I think so too!
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Date: 2003-04-28 10:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mergatrude.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad I convinced you. And happy birthday!

Date: 2003-04-23 11:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jack-pride.livejournal.com
"Whatever do you mean, Ray?"

Oh, no, you're not fooling *nobody*. *g*

That's adorable. And I want to hear more about the narwhal smuggling ring. ;)

Date: 2003-04-28 10:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mergatrude.livejournal.com
Thanks. Now there's a campfire story for a cold winter's night ...

Date: 2003-04-24 05:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynnmonster.livejournal.com
I love your playful Ray and Fraser!

Date: 2003-04-28 10:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mergatrude.livejournal.com
Thanks. I aspire to angst, but the world needs fluff too.

Date: 2003-04-24 07:36 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] shayheyred.livejournal.com
This reads like great dialogue from the series, which is terrific. Funny.

Date: 2003-04-28 10:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mergatrude.livejournal.com
Thanks! What a great compliment. Does that mean the voices in my head are Canadian?

Date: 2003-04-28 10:34 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] shayheyred.livejournal.com
'Fraid so, Eh!

Date: 2003-04-24 08:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurakaye.livejournal.com
awww, so *cute*.

Date: 2003-04-28 10:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mergatrude.livejournal.com
Thanks! As I said elsewhere, I aspire to angst, but the world needs fluff from time to time.

Date: 2003-04-24 09:33 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] helvirago
Oh, that's wonderful. I really like it. Reads like a shot from the show, just edited out for time.

Date: 2003-04-28 10:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mergatrude.livejournal.com
Thank you. I'm totally chuffed that you thinks so!

Nice!

Date: 2003-04-24 12:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] countess7.livejournal.com
Slick!Fraser how I love to see you play with Ray. Can't fool him, though.

This is great!

Re: Nice!

Date: 2003-04-28 10:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mergatrude.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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