Scar challenge

[sihayab.livejournal.com]

A little piece of frippery, with many thanks to kassrachel for her usual sterling beta work.


His Story


His finger traced the borders of the rough spot, such a contrast to the
smoothness surrounding it. "An unfortunate incident involving a bushel of
apples, two Arctic hares, and Stinky McSweegan."

Ray nodded. "I don't think I want to know more. How 'bout this one?" He
pointed to a small, pale circle.

"Ah." Fraser winced at the memory. "A misbegotten attempt at archery."

Ray echoed the wince. "'Nuff said. And this?" A thin line, broken in
places, but still recognizably encircling.

"Handcuffs."

Lifting an eyebrow, Ray regarded him steadily. "Work? Or fun?"

Fraser's eyes fell, and his cheeks warmed. "I'd rather not answer that."

"Well." Ray stood and gave the battered bedstead a smack. "It's got lots
of memories, Frase, but I still vote for the brass queen-size."

Fraser's hand lingered on the pitted wood. "As do I, Ray."

Comments

[chickwriter.livejournal.com]

Greatness! Loved your take on this. :)

[lynnmonster.livejournal.com]

Ahahaha! You *totally* had me fooled. (And I *love* them discussing bedroom furniture...)

[bethbethbeth.livejournal.com]

My, aren't you just the tricksy one!!

::loves::

[estrella30.livejournal.com]

eee! I have such love for this story!

*hugs you tight*

Abslute perfection!

[kassrachel.livejournal.com]

Bwahahaha!

I just love this -- funny, and sexy, and sweet, all wrapped into a neat little package. Yum!

[kassrachel.livejournal.com]

...though, you know, I really meant to reply with my Fraser icon, not my Jack Bauer icon. Jack Bauer does not belong in dS-land. No no no no no.

::boots the mere notion of a xover in the head::

[imkalena.livejournal.com]

Ooooh! Tew cute! I really want to hear about the Stinky McSweegan incident, though. :)

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

Hee! You are crafty. And the dialogue is wonderfully right on the money.

[elmyraemilie.livejournal.com]

I'm voting for the handcuffs, too.

Stinky McSweegan was Fraser's neighbor when he was 15. She was cute, in a tomboy sort of way, and she was great with a shotgun. Fraser's crush on her met an untimely death after the incident with the apples.

[the-star-fish.livejournal.com]

Bwahahahaha!! Love it!!

[spainja.livejournal.com]

Short, sweet, and great characterization. You say a lot with just a few words. Great work!

[nowlive.livejournal.com]

Okay. See. That just begs for more telling. And showing. And, okay, S*X. So, um, more is my plea. Please....

[tobyfan.livejournal.com]

Ooh, yummy and sweet. *g*

[chesamus.livejournal.com]

Such a tease - all three of you! Great pick me up on a rainy day.

[silverakira.livejournal.com]

[grin] Clever, funny, and sweet. Absolutely lovely.

[rowanfairchild.livejournal.com]

Naughty you. ;-) Loved this.