Jewelry challenge entry
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This is just a little quickie. *kisses![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
brooklinegirl for the early-morning beta*
Ray chewed on his bracelet when he thought nobody was looking.
Fraser knew the pattern. When they were on a stakeout, or if they were waiting for Sandor, or if Ray was pondering a particularly difficult case, it was inevitable.
First, he would release the catch quickly, with a light flick of his fingers.
He then unwound the chain from around his wrist, dragging the metal across the light hair on his wrists, and twisting it around his knuckles.
Ray liked to play with the bracelet a bit first. He worried the beads through his fingers, back and forth, perhaps a vestige from his Catholic childhood.
Fraser imagined that the beads grew warm and slick under his touch; the friction building up and causing Ray’s hands to sweat.
After a few minutes, if Ray was particularly bored or preoccupied, he transferred the clasp end to his mouth. His quick agile hand still twisted and rubbed the beads, but the clasp would work in and out of his mouth.
Fraser would watch, fascinated, as the tiny glints of metal slipped between Ray’s lips. The metal would be even hotter now, and visibly wet.
He wondered if Ray’s mouth tasted like silver.
He wondered if Ray’s tongue was as agile as his fingers.
He wondered if he would ever find out.
Doubtful. It was foolish to harbor such hopes.
Inevitably, the suspect would arrive, or Lieutenant Welsh would call. Ray would sit up and, in one practiced move, wind the bracelet around his wrist and click the clasp shut.
Fraser would say nothing, except the occasional, “That’s a very unsanitary habit, Ray.”
They’d argue about it for a few minutes, and then it would be forgotten again in the rhythm of their partnership.
This is just a little quickie. *kisses
brooklinegirl for the early-morning beta*Ray chewed on his bracelet when he thought nobody was looking.
Fraser knew the pattern. When they were on a stakeout, or if they were waiting for Sandor, or if Ray was pondering a particularly difficult case, it was inevitable.
First, he would release the catch quickly, with a light flick of his fingers.
He then unwound the chain from around his wrist, dragging the metal across the light hair on his wrists, and twisting it around his knuckles.
Ray liked to play with the bracelet a bit first. He worried the beads through his fingers, back and forth, perhaps a vestige from his Catholic childhood.
Fraser imagined that the beads grew warm and slick under his touch; the friction building up and causing Ray’s hands to sweat.
After a few minutes, if Ray was particularly bored or preoccupied, he transferred the clasp end to his mouth. His quick agile hand still twisted and rubbed the beads, but the clasp would work in and out of his mouth.
Fraser would watch, fascinated, as the tiny glints of metal slipped between Ray’s lips. The metal would be even hotter now, and visibly wet.
He wondered if Ray’s mouth tasted like silver.
He wondered if Ray’s tongue was as agile as his fingers.
He wondered if he would ever find out.
Doubtful. It was foolish to harbor such hopes.
Inevitably, the suspect would arrive, or Lieutenant Welsh would call. Ray would sit up and, in one practiced move, wind the bracelet around his wrist and click the clasp shut.
Fraser would say nothing, except the occasional, “That’s a very unsanitary habit, Ray.”
They’d argue about it for a few minutes, and then it would be forgotten again in the rhythm of their partnership.
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Date: 2004-09-05 06:39 am (UTC)I read this again immediately after you posted. God.
This:
His quick agile hand still twisted and rubbed the beads, but the clasp would work in and out of his mouth.
Plus Fraser's reaction here:
Fraser would watch, fascinated, as the tiny glints of metal slipped between Ray’s lips. The metal would be even hotter now, and visibly wet.
is one of the very hottest things I have ever, ever read. My god. Total bracelet fetish and I'm quite okay with that.
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Date: 2004-09-05 12:40 pm (UTC)Um.
Fraser would watch, fascinated, as the tiny glints of metal slipped between Ray’s lips. The metal would be even hotter now, and visibly wet.
Jesus.
He wondered if Ray’s tongue was as agile as his fingers.
This is just so incredibly hot. And only 285 words, at that.
[loves on you]
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Date: 2004-09-05 01:23 pm (UTC)(Really, really nice Fraser-voice, too. The woobie.)
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Date: 2004-09-05 07:14 pm (UTC)Thank you!
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Date: 2004-09-06 02:22 pm (UTC)Bracelet.
Bracelet.
Bracelet.
Fetish.
Fetish.
Fetish.
He wondered if he would ever find out.
This was beautiful. LOVE!