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Since I suggested the challenge, I figure I ought to respond this time. *g* [livejournal.com profile] sihayab says this one's good enough to post, so here 'tis! I present five linked drabbles on the theme of ice.

Ice


I. Rink

"No -- no -- no, wait, yes, yes!" Fraser hovered on the edge of the couch, body tensed, as the shot was deflected, skittered across the rink, zipped from here to there, flew into the air at the clash of sticks, and beautifully, improbably, sailed into the goal.

Ray sneaked a glance at Fraser. His face was flushed, his eyes were bright, he looked...more edible than usual.

Ray couldn't help imagining him that animated, that excited, naked, against Ray's own sheets.

Now Ray was flushed.

"Hell of a shot," he said, trying to get his mind back on the ice.



II. Fields

Expanses of glacier, gleaming in the sun. A team of dogs harnessed to a sled, curled into circles, each half-covered by blowing snow. A landscape of ice, peaks and ridges, topped by the weird watercolors of the Northern Lights.

Ray stood in front of the Discovery store for almost fifteen minutes, staring at the posters. Wondering whether that was what it looked like where Fraser came from. Wondering whether Fraser would dig one. Wondering whether he was supposed to be getting Fraser a Christmas gift anyway.

In the end he bought postcard-sized ones, and hung them on his own fridge.



III. Cream

"Only Eskimoes eat ice cream in January, Fraser."

"Inuit," Fraser corrected, though Ray could hear that he was smiling. He knew Ray was just messing with him.

"Whatever."

"And historically-speaking, ice cream didn't reach most Inuit communities until--"

"My point was, you're a freak."

"Understood."

They sat on a bench to eat. Somehow Fraser's cone stayed symmetrical as he licked it.

Ray was slurping his, because it was dripping. He was trying not to watch Fraser's tongue.

When he glanced over, Fraser's cheeks were pink. From the cold, probably.

Ray wished it were because Fraser was watching his tongue, too.



IV. Pack

"Ow, that's cold," Ray said, yanking the bag of frozen peas off his temple.

Fraser scowled. "You're going to have quite an egg there."

"Whether or not I ice it," Ray retorted. "So I might as well be comfortable now."

Fraser muttered "suit yourself" and went to put the kettle on.

"At least we got the guy," Ray called into the kitchen.

"True."

"Bet nobody's icing his bruises tonight," Ray said, thinking of DiLuca in lockup with grim satisfaction.

And actually he kind of liked that Fraser fussed over him when he got hurt. Wasn't about to admit it, though.



V. House

"This is seriously cool," Ray said, again. Fraser grinned and kept placing blocks.

The igloo was finished by dinnertime. They rehydrated some stew, then curled into their bags.

"I guess we'd be okay if we lost the tent, long as you didn't mind building these every night."

"I could teach you," Fraser offered.

"It might take me a while to learn."

"I have all the time in the world." Words chosen carefully.

They weren't talking about the igloo anymore.

"Me too," Ray said.

Fraser smiled at him, full of promise.

A shard of ice Ray hadn't known he'd swallowed, thawed.

Date: 2004-11-08 07:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynnmonster.livejournal.com
Beautiful!

It just simmers until the warm, warm ending:

A shard of ice Ray hadn't known he'd swallowed, thawed.

::heart::

Date: 2004-11-08 07:47 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] shayheyred.livejournal.com
I made a little whimpering noise at the last one. Just thought you should know. It was a good whimper.

These are all terrific individually, and marvelous as a set.

Date: 2004-11-08 08:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
Mmmm, I loved this.

Date: 2004-11-08 08:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ekaterinn.livejournal.com
And actually he kind of liked that Fraser fussed over him when he got hurt. Wasn't about to admit it, though.

That's so
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<i>And actually he kind of liked that Fraser fussed over him when he got hurt. Wasn't about to admit it, though.</i>

That's so <i.Ray</i>. *smiles* Lovely story!

Date: 2004-11-08 09:31 pm (UTC)
sage: Still of Natasha Romanova from Iron Man 2 (rayk)
From: [personal profile] sage
Oh wow. This was a beautiful progression! Reading this gave me the best kind of warm fuzzies. *g*

Date: 2004-11-08 09:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mergatrude.livejournal.com
Wonderful how you can make something so cold warm me right down to my toes.

Date: 2004-11-08 10:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rjm-257.livejournal.com
Sweet and light. It's very beautiful in its simplicity.

Date: 2004-11-08 11:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] threequarters.livejournal.com
Ohh, very nice. The imagery was great and the language was sweet, poetic and beautiful. Very nicely done. Thank you.

Date: 2004-11-08 11:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mei-x.livejournal.com
I really enjoyed this!

Date: 2004-11-09 01:42 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] lamardeuse.livejournal.com
It's twenty to six in the morning, so I have nothing more coherent to say than: ooh. Ummm. Wow. Love it.

:)

Date: 2004-11-09 05:21 am (UTC)
ext_3579: I'm still not watching supernatural. (TYK (by Kat Allison))
From: [identity profile] the-star-fish.livejournal.com
Eeee!

SO much love. You are a genius. I especially like #2 -- gift-giving is so very fraught at times ...

Date: 2004-11-09 05:45 am (UTC)
ext_8892: (Oh Canada (kellie))
From: [identity profile] beledibabe.livejournal.com
Beautiful, hon. Just... perfect.

::mwah!::

Date: 2004-11-09 05:54 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] brynwulf
Thanks so much. You just made a very bad morning a bit better.

*heart*

Date: 2004-11-09 06:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chickwriter.livejournal.com
Love this! Such a lovely progression and revelation.

Thank you for sharing.

Date: 2004-11-09 06:19 am (UTC)

Date: 2004-11-09 08:23 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] akite.livejournal.com
Awww...that warmed my heart and made me smile.
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Date: 2004-11-09 10:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sprat.livejournal.com
Oh, nice! I love the structure you chose--I think it works really well. These are great little snapshots of the relationship, too.

Date: 2004-11-09 10:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] claire.livejournal.com
Beautiful.

Date: 2004-11-09 12:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] qe2.livejournal.com
Oh, wow.

Wonderful individually and together. And this?

Fraser smiled at him, full of promise.

A shard of ice Ray hadn't known he'd swallowed, thawed.


::loves her some Snow Queen imagery::

Thank you.

Date: 2004-11-09 03:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elmyraemilie.livejournal.com
So very nice. A happy ending in an igloo.

::sigh::

Thanks for the smile!

Date: 2004-11-09 06:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zebra363.livejournal.com
"I have all the time in the world." Words chosen carefully.

They weren't talking about the igloo anymore.


Fantastic!

Date: 2004-11-15 03:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] whitepuppy.livejournal.com
I loved this story!

Somehow Fraser's cone stayed symmetrical as he licked it.

Very Fraser!

Date: 2004-11-23 10:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] estrella30.livejournal.com
"I could teach you," Fraser offered.

"It might take me a while to learn."

"I have all the time in the world." Words chosen carefully.

They weren't talking about the igloo anymore.

"Me too," Ray said.


...And then Estrella melted as well *g*

This is lovely! Thank you!

(And sorry the comments are so late in coming!)

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