[identity profile] dracostella.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] ds_flashfiction
150 words snippet...


"I’m not going to always be doing this! Look, as soon as I get done with this assignment I’ll turn in my badge... Hello? Hello? Ah FUCK!"

On his forty-third birthday, his wife left him. The next day he got promoted to a desk job.

"Angie, Angie, don’t hang up, don’t, ah fuck."

His forth year as a lieutenant, he met Ray Vecchio, and saw his marriage played out again.

"Stella! Come on! Stella... STE... ah fuck!"

Two weeks after Ray Kowalski walked into his precinct, he realized how tired he was of the same old song.

"Ray, Ray, Ray, RAY! The lieutenant already knows."

The moment he saw the mountie after the two of them came back from his adventure, he knew he was two detectives short, but he couldn’t help smiling.

The next day, he asked his neighbor Charlene to have dinner with him, and she said yes.

Date: 2003-04-30 08:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aerye.livejournal.com
Yes! Welsh gets some action!

Date: 2003-04-30 08:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jack-pride.livejournal.com
He shoulda asked his neighbour Charlie out - worked for Fraser and Kowalski. ;)

This is great. I love seeing F/K through other people's eyes.

Plus, I never get over "Ray, Ray, Ray, RAY!" 'cause I'm weird that way. *g*

Date: 2003-04-30 10:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jenboo.livejournal.com
yay! Welsh finds hope after seeing Ray and Ben together. Go, Harding!! :D

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Date: 2003-04-30 10:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yeungmaisu.livejournal.com
This is very sweet. Plus, it's nice to see Welsh as the main character and taking a chance on love after being inspired by Fraser and Ray.

Date: 2003-05-01 08:36 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] doll-revolution.livejournal.com
oh, very nice! ^__^

and it is good to see welsh in on the fun.

you know, lucy hale wrote a really, really, really long welsh/turnbull story, but i forget what it was called. it was very good, and oddly believable.

Date: 2003-05-01 04:58 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] lamardeuse.livejournal.com
Oh, yeah. Neat. Sweet. I can't imagine how people manage to get this much across in this few words.

More Welsh! More Welsh! More Welsh!

Date: 2003-05-02 01:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cesperanza.livejournal.com
Count me in with the people who are saying how nice it is to hear from Welsh for a change! Also, I thought your story structure was original, too, and lots of fun. Not the same old song, in other words!

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