Request for beta
Oct. 10th, 2005 09:05 amHi. I'm looking for beta of about 2600 words of additional time-travel F/K, now rated R or so, for the Something Gets It challenge. If you're interested in doing the beta, please comment here, and I'll set you up with access. Thanks!
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Date: 2005-10-10 04:33 pm (UTC)Re: hmm
Date: 2005-10-10 07:08 pm (UTC)There are two loosely connected previous parts, the first one of which is very short. I'm not sure whether it'll be an ongoing story after this part--the bits of the story have been coming to me gradually, and I don't know how much I'll get.
I've set you up so (hopefully!) you can see part 3 (which needs the beta) here (http://www.livejournal.com/users/danceswchopstck/30779.html); the intro paragraph to part 3 has links to the two previous parts. Don't be alarmed that part 3 currently has "#2" in the post title--that's an artifact of how the story is evolving, and may not be the title of what I actually post to the comm for part #3.
I'm particularly interested in your opinions on the following:
a) Does it work, in general? Is it fun to read?
b) Are there any parts that you find unclear or think I should take out?
c) Is it too hokey or over-the-top? (I was kind of startled, myself, re where it went!)
Thanks again!