[identity profile] laughingacademy.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] ds_flashfiction
Title: Hammer to Fall
Pairing: gen
Rating: G
Length: 100 words
Notes: I’ve taken a minor liberty with the challenge, and the bibliographical information is entirely invented.

“Nobody moves, and the Mountie gets it!” hissed Dewey.

Frannie shut her mouth when she caught Welsh’s quelling glare. Turnbull bit his lip and literally sat on his hands. Kowalski was so tightly wound that he’d broken the Twitch Barrier; only his eyes moved, tracking the hammer as it rose, trembled at the top of its arc...

BANG!

“Sold! To the constable, one near-fine copy of the 1874 Manual of the North-West Mounted Police.”

Francesca squealed and Turnbull cried out “Oh, well done, sir!” as Fraser, beaming, made his way forward to ask the cashier if Canadian currency was acceptable.

Date: 2005-10-19 07:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riverlight.livejournal.com
LOL. LOL LOL LOL. That cracked me up!

Date: 2005-10-19 10:49 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] akite.livejournal.com
Hee! Cute.

Date: 2005-10-19 12:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sjkasabi.livejournal.com
Hee! Very cute.

Date: 2005-10-19 01:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delurker.livejournal.com
What a wonderful twist on the challenge! Very cute indeed.

Date: 2005-10-19 07:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] torakowalski.livejournal.com
Awww..! Very clever *g*

Date: 2005-10-19 08:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vienna-waits.livejournal.com
BWAH!!! Hilarious! And this?

Kowalski was so tightly wound that he’d broken the Twitch Barrier
Wonderful!!

Very, very clever, and very, very funny!

Date: 2005-10-19 08:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ceares.livejournal.com
Very nice-cute how they all had to strain not to move.

Date: 2005-10-19 10:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bonspiel.livejournal.com
Ha! Clever.

Date: 2005-10-19 10:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mergatrude.livejournal.com
Very cute!

Date: 2005-10-20 04:12 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] lorem_ipsum
:D

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