Whitehorse Holiday, by Isis ([livejournal.com profile] isiscolo)

Oct. 21st, 2006 09:25 pm
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Whitehorse Holiday, by Isis ([livejournal.com profile] isiscolo)
Fraser/RayK, PG, 970 words
Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] riverlight for beta-reading. This is based on Chicago Holiday, which you can probably tell from the title, huh?


The first set had gone well, Christina thought. She had to give her agent credit; when he'd first suggested a tour of western Canada, she'd thought he was nuts, but the people there were gratifyingly polite and actually listened to her singing and David's piano playing, instead of just talking louder so they could hear each other over the music. And they bought more CDs than the people in Ottawa and Toronto, too. Maybe they just didn't get a lot of good jazz singers out here in the sticks. Whatever it was, they treated her like she was something special, and she liked it.

She drank her first glass of water quickly, but as the bartender handed her another, she noticed a man approaching. She set down the water and gave him a practiced smile, calibrated to be just friendly enough without being overly encouraging.

"Miss Nichols," the man said warmly. "I never expected you'd become an entertainer, but you're quite talented. I'm impressed."

"I'm sorry, do I know you?" He didn't look familiar, and as far as she knew she didn't know anybody in Whitehorse. But he was older than her, probably forty or so - maybe he was one of her father's friends, someone from the government.

He put out a hand, and she shook it automatically. "Benton Fraser. Although you might remember me as…Chicago."

Her hand flew to her mouth. "Oh my God! Chicago!" The Mountie who'd been assigned to look after her - God, it seemed so long ago. Seven years ago? Eight? "I can't believe you remember. In fact, I'm kind of embarrassed you remember. I was just a kid."

"Wise for your years."

"Or trying to pretend I was, anyway." She shook her head. "I really put you through hell, didn't I?"

"Part of the job," he said. "But it all turned out all right in the end."

"I guess," she said, taking a gulp of water. "I still can't believe you're here." Then she gave him a side-long glance. He wasn't wearing that ridiculous red uniform, but he still looked immaculate, straight-backed and solid in jeans and a pale blue dress shirt. There was a ring on his left hand; he must have gotten married, then. Probably had the regulation two-point-five kids and a doting stay-at-home wife. And he was wearing a tie. Nobody wore a tie to a nightclub. "Not just that it's been so long. It's just hard to believe that you're here," she said, gesturing to take in the room.

"I'd never intended Chicago to be a permanent home. I've been stationed here in Whitehorse for some years."

"I don't just mean Whitehorse. I mean, here here. The 'Lizard Lounge'." She made little quotes in the air with her fingers; it was a silly name. "I remember how you were in that club in Chicago. Nightclubs just don't seem like your kind of scene."

"True, they're not," he said, nodding toward her in acknowledgment. Yeah, it wasn't too hard to figure that Fraser wasn't a nightclub sort of guy. She remembered him as stiff and strait-laced, all prim and proper. Straight as an arrow. Like a knight out of a fairy tale, or at least, that was what he had been for her. Hopefully she hadn't done him too much damage, making him chase her all around the seamiest parts of Chicago. She had to suppress a giggle, remembering him in the fetish bar. Lord, that had been something.

"But I saw your name in the newspaper, and I wanted to see if Christina Nichols of the Christina Nichols Band was the same girl who had given me such an - interesting time in Chicago," Fraser continued. "And of course, Ray was delighted to have the opportunity to go out."

"Ray?"

He gestured toward one of the tables lining the edges of the dance floor, catching the eye of a blond man who rose and walked over toward them with an easy grace. He was about Fraser's age, she guessed, but had a wilder look about him. Yeah, he probably went to nightclubs a lot.

Ray nodded to her as he approached. "Nice voice you got there," he said. He sounded American.

"My partner, Ray," said Fraser.

"Oh, you're a Mountie, too?" Huh, guess he was Canadian after all. She'd heard so many accents as a child, traveling around with her father. She thought she was pretty good at identifying them, but sometimes she got them wrong.

But Fraser was shaking his head. "My partner," he repeated meaningfully; and it was then that she noticed that Ray wore a ring, too, a simple silver band that looked identical to the one Fraser wore.

"Oh," she said dumbly. "Yeah, I get it." And it was obvious, the way they looked at each other. Like there wasn't anybody else in the room that mattered. She looked Ray in the eyes and grinned. "Listen, I got my next set coming up," she said. "You take care of Chicago here, okay?"

There was no reason Ray would have known what she meant, but it looked like he did, anyway, because he nodded. "I always do."

"Nice seeing you again," she said to Fraser, and he and Ray went back to their table.

She tossed back the rest of the water in her glass and headed back out to the microphone. At the piano, David caught her eye, and she nodded, and he started the next number. She looked out into the smoky bar, looking for Fraser's table. There he sat, he and Ray, and as the first notes of the piano went spiraling into the room she could see the two of them, looking into each other's eyes and smiling.

You're not so much of a straight arrow after all, Chicago, she thought, as she started to sing.
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Date: 2006-10-22 03:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the_antichris.livejournal.com
This is great! Christina's one of my favourite one-off characters.

Date: 2006-10-22 04:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mondschein1.livejournal.com
Awwww, Christina. He is a straight arrow, but he is a bent straight arrow, see? *attempts to teach her the ways of the Fraser*

Date: 2006-10-22 04:36 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] china_shop
Aw, yay! This is great! ♥

Date: 2006-10-22 04:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] purpig21.livejournal.com
AWWWWWW, you hit some of my fave buttons here. I love established F/K, and one of my fave eps was Chicago Holiday.

So very nice to see her again. and know Ben and Ray are so happy up in Canada.

Excellent work!

yay!

Date: 2006-10-22 04:50 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] springwoof.livejournal.com
I liked Chicago Holiday, and it was neat to see what you did with it! (love Fraser & Ray "married" fics)

Date: 2006-10-22 07:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
Oh, I really enjoyed this!

Date: 2006-10-22 07:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cardalia.livejournal.com
Lovely!I really liked Christina, I wish people used her more. And nothing makes a girl happier than Fraser and Ray together in Canada.

Date: 2006-10-22 08:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delurker.livejournal.com
How lovely!

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Date: 2006-10-22 09:22 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] eledhwenlin
Awwwwww. Christina was so cute. :D

Date: 2006-10-22 09:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] revbiscuit.livejournal.com
What a nice suprise to wake up to! I really liked her, and I can see her as a jazz singer. Really nice story. I've been eyeing up this challenge with a lot of curiosity, it's good to see how these other characters can be given lives of their own.

Date: 2006-10-22 10:02 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Very nice.I like the seeing Fraser through someone else's eyes.I do think this is how he appears to other people.

Date: 2006-10-22 10:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] allzugern.livejournal.com
What a great snapshot from the future. It is exactly as I would expect things to be. Using Christina and her POV here worked beautifully; it made the scene feel natural - not a forced set of circumstances.

Thanks for posting this :-)

Date: 2006-10-22 11:41 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] sam80853.livejournal.com
Christina, yes! And a ring, YES!!!

Date: 2006-10-22 12:01 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] akite.livejournal.com
"But I saw your name in the newspaper, and I wanted to see if Christina Nichols of the Christina Nichols Band was the same girl who had given me such an - interesting time in Chicago,"

Hee! Such tact, Fraser. Great story!

Date: 2006-10-22 01:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] grey853.livejournal.com
Nice story. I love to think of Ray and Fraser together, going out, looking into one another's eyes, out for the world to see as partners.

Date: 2006-10-22 02:49 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] primroseburrows.livejournal.com
Aww. *pictures Fraser with 2.5 kids*


Very nice story. :)

Date: 2006-10-22 11:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mergatrude.livejournal.com
Yay! A lovely idea.

Date: 2006-10-23 01:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lilac-one.livejournal.com
Well done, as usual, my friend. Thank you.

Date: 2006-10-23 06:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] viciouswishes.livejournal.com
That was really quite cute.

Date: 2006-10-23 10:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] proserpina-kore.livejournal.com
It's nice to be reminded so enjoyably of eps that I haven't seen for a long while - thanks, lovely story :-)

Date: 2006-10-23 12:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chickwriter.livejournal.com
Sweet! I always like 3rd party POV stories, and this was even better by using one of my favorite one-off characters. :)

Good job!
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Date: 2006-10-24 03:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] j-s-cavalcante.livejournal.com
Oh, lovely! *Melts!* Because Ray and Fraser, with rings, and out together--in more ways than one :)--and Christina a singer! Yay. She discovered nightclubs really were her thing, eh? And Fraser, so "all in a day's work" about what he went through with that former brat! LOL Good for her that she did the unexpected thing and left the high-society-diplomatic-LONELY life to Daddy.

I'm hearing Holly Cole in my head--Christina would have a similar voice, too! (Not difficult to hear it in my head, as I play the DS soundtracks in the car all the time. My kids love them, too.)

What a great double episode to take off from. Love it! I don't remember ever reading Christina fic before. (Though I don't read a lot of F/V, so I don't know what's been done there.)

And Ray understood her. I LOVE that. {{{hugs}}} This is great.

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Date: 2006-10-26 04:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluebrocade.livejournal.com
Great idea! Very nice!

Date: 2006-11-30 10:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] justabi.livejournal.com
Awww, she remembered him. That is awesome. And I love how totally cool Fraser and Ray are up there. *happy*
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