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ds_flashfictionTitle: Sudden Changes in Conversational Statregy
Pairing: F/K
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 550
"That is the stupidest thing you have ever said to me, Fraser, I swear to God," said Ray.
We were in his car, a 1967 Pontiac Gran Turismo Omologato. It's a remarkably lovely car, even for one such as myself who is less interested in motor vehicles. It is Ray's prize possession, although one might not guess so from his driving style. His speeding, for example, or how he frequently takes his hands off the wheel, and otherwise chooses not to follow recommended safety rules.
Ray's glare is remarkedly lupine, in a number of ways.
"I wouldn't say that, Ray. I'm sure I've said much more annoying things to you. For example, when we were trapped on the sinking ship the Henry Allen and I--"
"Stop right there. Stop!" Ray lifted up one hand to me, in addition to his repeated entreaties.
I stopped -- and then I opened my mouth once more, just to tell him once again that there's no need to be rude. This caused Ray to snort.
"I am not saying you never say stupid things, Fraser. You say stupid thing to me all the time. You say 'That's just silly, Ray' and 'That's a fetching poncho, Ray' and 'Ray, if I may be so bold, you look surprisingly angelic as a nun, Ray' and--"
"I don't think I ever said that last one," I said. Dief woofed in agreement.
"But if I ever dressed up like a nun, you would!" Ray said, with a tone of triumph in his voice as if he had just won an important argument.
I exchanged another look with Diefenbaker; he did his wolfish equivalent of shrugging his shoulder and went back to looking out the window in the backseat.
"My point is, Fraser, the thing of my point in this situation is that you do not know what you are talking about because I love this car, and I would do anything for this car, and for you to say otherwise is just, it's just -- it's wrong, Fraser, and I expect better of you, and I don't know why you would say such a thing."
The car came to a sudden, unexpected halt, as Ray turned into a parking space alongside the road. "You wanna talk about how to treat things, how about how you treat the wolf? How about how you treat me?"
I was confused by this sudden change in conversational strategy. "How do I treat you, Ray?"
This stopped the flood of words from Ray's mouth, finally, though not for very long. He stared at me, and then his eyes narrowed, and the lines in his cheeks creased, as if he had thought of something, and it amused him.
"You treat me the same way I treat you, Fraser. And that's exactly how come you should be able to tell how much I love my car." He patted me on the shoulder, letting his warm hand rest for a minute against my bicep, and then turned around to exit himself from the vehicle. "Come on, Fraser, we got things to do and people to see," he called behind him.
It took me a few seconds to gather myself to follow him, and even as I did, I could feel a goofy grin still spread across my face.
Pairing: F/K
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 550
"That is the stupidest thing you have ever said to me, Fraser, I swear to God," said Ray.
We were in his car, a 1967 Pontiac Gran Turismo Omologato. It's a remarkably lovely car, even for one such as myself who is less interested in motor vehicles. It is Ray's prize possession, although one might not guess so from his driving style. His speeding, for example, or how he frequently takes his hands off the wheel, and otherwise chooses not to follow recommended safety rules.
Ray's glare is remarkedly lupine, in a number of ways.
"I wouldn't say that, Ray. I'm sure I've said much more annoying things to you. For example, when we were trapped on the sinking ship the Henry Allen and I--"
"Stop right there. Stop!" Ray lifted up one hand to me, in addition to his repeated entreaties.
I stopped -- and then I opened my mouth once more, just to tell him once again that there's no need to be rude. This caused Ray to snort.
"I am not saying you never say stupid things, Fraser. You say stupid thing to me all the time. You say 'That's just silly, Ray' and 'That's a fetching poncho, Ray' and 'Ray, if I may be so bold, you look surprisingly angelic as a nun, Ray' and--"
"I don't think I ever said that last one," I said. Dief woofed in agreement.
"But if I ever dressed up like a nun, you would!" Ray said, with a tone of triumph in his voice as if he had just won an important argument.
I exchanged another look with Diefenbaker; he did his wolfish equivalent of shrugging his shoulder and went back to looking out the window in the backseat.
"My point is, Fraser, the thing of my point in this situation is that you do not know what you are talking about because I love this car, and I would do anything for this car, and for you to say otherwise is just, it's just -- it's wrong, Fraser, and I expect better of you, and I don't know why you would say such a thing."
The car came to a sudden, unexpected halt, as Ray turned into a parking space alongside the road. "You wanna talk about how to treat things, how about how you treat the wolf? How about how you treat me?"
I was confused by this sudden change in conversational strategy. "How do I treat you, Ray?"
This stopped the flood of words from Ray's mouth, finally, though not for very long. He stared at me, and then his eyes narrowed, and the lines in his cheeks creased, as if he had thought of something, and it amused him.
"You treat me the same way I treat you, Fraser. And that's exactly how come you should be able to tell how much I love my car." He patted me on the shoulder, letting his warm hand rest for a minute against my bicep, and then turned around to exit himself from the vehicle. "Come on, Fraser, we got things to do and people to see," he called behind him.
It took me a few seconds to gather myself to follow him, and even as I did, I could feel a goofy grin still spread across my face.
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Date: 2006-12-23 12:18 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-23 12:24 am (UTC)P.S You've spelled car as casr in the 6th paragraph up form the bottom.
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Date: 2006-12-23 01:54 am (UTC)and ps there's no need to be rude (you're missing a word there).
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Date: 2006-12-23 02:46 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-23 03:29 am (UTC)baby, you just summed up why I heart Ray and Fraser so very much, right there. all show, no tell, and that is PERFECTION. You are entirely made of awesome.
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Date: 2006-12-23 04:54 am (UTC)That is such a perfect Ray Kowalski sentence that I am prostrate with delight at the Ray-ish goodness. Ray's statement to Fraser at the end, and his behavior, is likewise absolute perfection. You have mastered these characters. It's a beautiful thing to see. Great, great piece.
Since others gave you typo comments, I will, too. Here's one you won't see everywhere, but since this piece is in first-person Fraser POV, I'd expect this word to be correct--Fraser would know, wouldn't he? "Bicep" isn't a word. It's "biceps," whether you're talking about one arm or both. It's Latin for "two heads," and refers to the shape of the muscle, which has two heads or points of origin. "Triceps" and "quadriceps" have three and four heads, respectively, and there is a biceps in the back of the leg, too.
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Date: 2006-12-23 10:01 am (UTC)*snigger* That's right, Fraser -- why not cite your worst moments! *g*
This is lovely! Yumm!
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Date: 2006-12-23 04:04 pm (UTC)*glee!*
This is lovely -- made me smile.
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Date: 2006-12-23 04:50 pm (UTC)I exchanged another look with Diefenbaker; he did his wolfish equivalent of shrugging his shoulder and went back to looking out the window in the backseat.
That amused me enormously, and is such good Ray, Fraser, and Dief.
The whole thing is delightful and just fills me with RayandFraser love.
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Date: 2006-12-23 07:32 pm (UTC)"But if I ever dressed up like a nun, you would!" Ray said, with a tone of triumph in his voice as if he had just won an important argument.
Oh, boys!
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Date: 2006-12-29 06:22 pm (UTC)Vee
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Date: 2006-12-31 04:56 pm (UTC)*heart*