Sunlight challenge, by [livejournal.com profile] mergatrude

Jun. 29th, 2007 01:56 pm
[identity profile] mergatrude.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] ds_flashfiction


And then

Ray wakes up sun-warmed; he forgot to close the blinds last night. Stretches out an arm, but he's the only body tangled in the sheets and that chills him a little.

A sound from the doorway makes him sit up and squint in the bright morning light.

Vecchio's shirt's not so crisp, unbuttoned at the collar, shoes are all untied. A smile is fading from his face as he starts to make excuses. But Ray's not listening. Vecchio stayed till Ray woke up.

"Hey," Ray says. "Don't I get a kiss before you go?"

The smile creeps back.




Beta provided by the fabulous Ms Shop. &hearts

Date: 2007-06-29 04:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slidellra.livejournal.com
*loves*

You make me happy. This is wonderful.

Date: 2007-06-29 05:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] panijeziora.livejournal.com
hehehe, RayK so cute in the morning :)
Don't I get a kiss before you go?
i would give him one myself but somehow i don't think RayV would not kill me XD

Date: 2007-06-29 05:55 am (UTC)
eledhwenlin: (Default)
From: [personal profile] eledhwenlin
Awwwww. :D

Date: 2007-06-29 08:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] viciouscats.livejournal.com
Awwwwww! :)

Date: 2007-06-29 11:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] r-vecchio.livejournal.com
Awwwwww! OMG, it's scary how much I love that!

Date: 2007-06-29 12:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] exeterlinden.livejournal.com
Ahh, gorgeous :)

Date: 2007-06-29 03:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nos4a2no9.livejournal.com
This right here? THIS is adorable! And I like the idea of Vecchio almost-but-not-quite sneaking out, and Ray being all coy and requesting kisses. BOYKISSING is the perfect way to end any fic.

Date: 2007-06-29 05:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dragonflymuse.livejournal.com
::happy sigh::

Those boys are so cute :)

Date: 2007-06-29 06:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brigantine.livejournal.com
This feels like the early part of a budding relationship, where Vecchio, while hopeful, maybe isn't quite sure of his way, until Ray provides him with a welcome certainty.

Am liking very much! *snuggles sweet drabble*

Date: 2007-06-29 08:14 pm (UTC)
ext_12460: acquired from fanpop.com (Sweet by tx_tart)
From: [identity profile] akite.livejournal.com
*points to her icon* That's my comment. *g*

Date: 2007-06-29 09:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] simplystars.livejournal.com
Awwww. *pets the Rays* :)

Date: 2007-06-30 03:11 am (UTC)
ext_3123: Ray Kowalski, slightly forlorn (Default)
From: [identity profile] ifreet.livejournal.com
So cute. So much aw!

Date: 2007-06-30 03:21 am (UTC)
ext_3190: Red icon with logo "I drink Nozz-a-la- Cola" in cursive. (dS: vecchio)
From: [identity profile] primroseburrows.livejournal.com
Oh, I love this. Ray V. stayed!

Date: 2007-07-01 03:36 pm (UTC)
ext_3190: Red icon with logo "I drink Nozz-a-la- Cola" in cursive. (dS: ray)
From: [identity profile] primroseburrows.livejournal.com
Oh, absolutely.

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