the holiday weekend. . .
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ds_flashfictionisn't really getting people to run right out and post, huh? :::snerk::: anyway, here's my entry. i aplogize in advance.
The door to Ray’s apartment burst open, banging hard into the far wall, propelled by the two bodies tumbling through it. Ray kept a tight grip on Fraser’s serge as he pushed Fraser against the wall, kissing him, tonguing him, devouring him.
Fraser growled deep in his throat, hands buried in Ray’s hair, holding his mouth, that wicked mouth, just right there. He kicked out blindly with a booted foot until the door slammed shut. Fraser pulled Ray even closer, sliding one hand slowly down Ray’s back, fighting his way past the tight waistband until his hand clutched desperately at the hot silky skin of Ray’s ass.
Fraser was vaguely aware of a low whining sound. Annoyed, he pulled his mouth away from Ray’s to glare at Diefenbaker. “Dief! Kitchen! Now!” he panted, shivering at the feel of Ray’s mouth on his neck. With a disgusted snort, Dief padded away and Fraser returned his full attention to Ray, who was frantically trying to pull off Fraser’s uniform.
Ray leaned in and bit Fraser hard on the collarbone, and then shoved Fraser away from him. Panting, eyes heavy-lidded with desire, Ray said, “Get that fucking thing off now, Ben!” He turned toward the bedroom, pulling his own clothes off as he went.
Fraser hastily followed, letting his uniform fall to the floor behind him. Naked, he threw himself at Ray, tumbling them both down on to the unmade bed. Ray growled, wrapping his legs around Fraser’s back. Fraser pinned Ray’s arms over his head and gnawed on his neck, rolling, thrusting, thrusting against Ray.
“Oh, fuck, Ben, that’s it, that’s it, that’s it!” Ray moaned, head thrashing, legs clenching until they shook, arching, thrusting, cock sliding against cock in a heavy heated burn. Pleasure rolled through Ray, viscous and sullen, and then a hot, wet tongue swiped heavily from his hole to his balls and Ray exploded, orgasm sparkling through him like a firestorm.
Still panting, still shaking and twitching, Ray pushed up on his elbows and looked in horror at Dief sitting on the bed, glistening tongue lolling from his mouth, a goddamned sarcastic smile on his face. Ray shoved Fraser on to the floor and ran for the bathroom.
Later, as Ray took a very long, very hot, very thorough shower, Fraser gave Dief an extremely stern lecture on the concept of ‘private time.’
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The door to Ray’s apartment burst open, banging hard into the far wall, propelled by the two bodies tumbling through it. Ray kept a tight grip on Fraser’s serge as he pushed Fraser against the wall, kissing him, tonguing him, devouring him.
Fraser growled deep in his throat, hands buried in Ray’s hair, holding his mouth, that wicked mouth, just right there. He kicked out blindly with a booted foot until the door slammed shut. Fraser pulled Ray even closer, sliding one hand slowly down Ray’s back, fighting his way past the tight waistband until his hand clutched desperately at the hot silky skin of Ray’s ass.
Fraser was vaguely aware of a low whining sound. Annoyed, he pulled his mouth away from Ray’s to glare at Diefenbaker. “Dief! Kitchen! Now!” he panted, shivering at the feel of Ray’s mouth on his neck. With a disgusted snort, Dief padded away and Fraser returned his full attention to Ray, who was frantically trying to pull off Fraser’s uniform.
Ray leaned in and bit Fraser hard on the collarbone, and then shoved Fraser away from him. Panting, eyes heavy-lidded with desire, Ray said, “Get that fucking thing off now, Ben!” He turned toward the bedroom, pulling his own clothes off as he went.
Fraser hastily followed, letting his uniform fall to the floor behind him. Naked, he threw himself at Ray, tumbling them both down on to the unmade bed. Ray growled, wrapping his legs around Fraser’s back. Fraser pinned Ray’s arms over his head and gnawed on his neck, rolling, thrusting, thrusting against Ray.
“Oh, fuck, Ben, that’s it, that’s it, that’s it!” Ray moaned, head thrashing, legs clenching until they shook, arching, thrusting, cock sliding against cock in a heavy heated burn. Pleasure rolled through Ray, viscous and sullen, and then a hot, wet tongue swiped heavily from his hole to his balls and Ray exploded, orgasm sparkling through him like a firestorm.
Still panting, still shaking and twitching, Ray pushed up on his elbows and looked in horror at Dief sitting on the bed, glistening tongue lolling from his mouth, a goddamned sarcastic smile on his face. Ray shoved Fraser on to the floor and ran for the bathroom.
Later, as Ray took a very long, very hot, very thorough shower, Fraser gave Dief an extremely stern lecture on the concept of ‘private time.’
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Date: 2003-05-26 09:27 am (UTC)Dief sitting on the bed, glistening tongue lolling from his mouth
can you blame him???
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Date: 2003-05-26 09:35 am (UTC)bwa ha ha ha!!!!
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Date: 2003-05-26 09:49 am (UTC)::wiping eyes::
Oh, god, this killed me. And brought up a very old memory of a friend who once confided she awoke from the most vivid erotic dream she'd ever had to find her cat licking her ass.
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Date: 2003-05-26 09:52 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-05-26 09:59 am (UTC)and you can just bet that shower was pretty damned thorough!
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Date: 2003-05-26 10:07 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-05-26 10:14 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-05-26 06:25 pm (UTC)i seem to have some weird fixation on dief's sex life. ah, well. a girl needs a hobby. ^__^
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Date: 2003-05-26 01:10 pm (UTC)Hot sex and a really funny ending. And no, I can't blame Dief either.
Now let's just hope Ray doesn't scrub too hard in the shower. We don't want him to hurt anything. *giggle*
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Date: 2003-05-26 06:28 pm (UTC)::giggle::
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Date: 2003-05-26 02:32 pm (UTC)Why the heck do I find 'Dief has sex with one of the guys' stories so damn hysterical? :-)
Poor Ray, having one of the best orgasms of his life thanks to Dief. Dief will never let him live it down. *G*
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Date: 2003-05-26 06:30 pm (UTC)and you are so right: dief will make them pay and pay and pay and pay. . .
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Date: 2003-05-26 06:32 pm (UTC)i can't help it. i have a, a thing for ray and dief.
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Date: 2003-05-28 03:16 am (UTC)I was thinking about the physics of them being plastered together and then the tongue...hunh? as I read that paragraph. And then when I got to the explanation that it wasn't Fraser's tongue...oh, MAN!
Too funny!
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Date: 2003-05-28 08:20 am (UTC)i didn't want to ruin their superior-feeling day by pointing out they obviously hadn't read the whole thing. ^__^
I'll bet . . .
Date: 2003-05-28 05:16 pm (UTC)SNERK
Karen