Beta?

[alex51324.livejournal.com]

Does anyone want to do a quick beta on a Turnbull story for the superpowers challenge?  I'm not very happy with it--it has its moments, but just kind of peters out at the end.  I should have asked for help sooner, but I thought something would come to me.  Anyway, if you're good with plot-direction-type stuff and can help try to whip the story into shape in time for the deadline, let me know.  Otherwise I'll put it aside and maybe take another whack at it when amnesty rolls around.  

Comments

[springwoof.livejournal.com]

I'd be happy to offer my services if you want them. Don't make any promises, but I'll give a good try. My email is my user name at yahoo dot com.

[eledhwenlin]

You can call me up at my livejournal address.

[alex51324.livejournal.com]

Thanks for the offer! Springwoof took a look at it for me. I'm putting it aside to possibly work on later.

[capt-spork.livejournal.com]

If you want to send it along, I can get to it in a couple of hours. Stupid job interviews. *grumble* :)

[alex51324.livejournal.com]

Thanks for the offer! Springwoof took a look at it for me. I'm putting it aside to possibly work on later.