Does anyone want to do a quick beta on a Turnbull story for the superpowers challenge? I'm not very happy with it--it has its moments, but just kind of peters out at the end. I should have asked for help sooner, but I thought something would come to me. Anyway, if you're good with plot-direction-type stuff and can help try to whip the story into shape in time for the deadline, let me know. Otherwise I'll put it aside and maybe take another whack at it when amnesty rolls around.
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