Refusal Challenge by Petronelle
Aug. 7th, 2008 09:36 pmTitle: Season Tickets
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski
Rating: All ages
Word count: 536
Notes:
nos4a2no9 asked me for F/K established relationship, and this was what happened. It answers the letter, though not the spirit, of that request.
Fraser was pining for Ray -- and he admitted that to himself -- but every time he got up the courage to kiss him, Ray became enamored of a woman. Fraser started watching hockey games at a bar near his apartment, both to get out of the place and to be somewhere where Ray wasn't; contrary to popular opinion, there's only so much a man can take, even if he does spend his working days in a red suit made of wool and torment.
The theoretically blond man who desultorily tried to start an argument with him over the Oilers and the Hawks wasn't easily defused -- the first time -- but Fraser managed to keep it from coming to one-sided blows. The next game night was two American teams, and he nearly stayed home, but the blond man was there again and offered him his choice of sides and a glass of cranberry juice as well as his name. That he, too, went by Ray was cruel coincidence, little more. That the latter Ray should allow himself to be kissed -- that was kinder coincidence, surely; he had not had enough to drink to be able to blame alcohol for his permissiveness.
Fraser did not have many evenings to himself given his dual employments. Those few that he did have free rarely coincided with hockey games, but the next time he found himself at loose ends, he found Ray likewise, at a table which, after half a season, had begun to feel more like "their" table than might be logically explained.
"Good to see you," Ray said, no accusation in his tone. Nothing but goodwill and acceptance.
He set two tickets on the table. "Ray," Fraser said, reading them upside down.
"Good thing you made it tonight," Ray said.
"I'm afraid I'm going to be busy that night as well." Fraser rubbed his eyebrow. "There's a function at the Consulate I must attend."
Ray rolled his eyes, his blond eyebrows arching. "You'd rather work than see a game with me?" He picked up the tickets again. "I see how it is."
"I'm afraid that at this point, I will be unable to secure the time off," Fraser said.
The faux pas did not inhibit Ray's demonstrative nature later in the evening to any apparent degree.
On the night of the game and the function, Fraser regretted his choice, particularly when the ambassador from Burundi vomited on his boots.
He did not see Ray again despite multiple visits to the bar that they had frequented.
When he returned from Canada, he was most taken aback by the coincidence and endeavored to ascertain Ray's identity, not only to ensure that he was not, in fact, Ray Vecchio, but that he was the same gentleman with whom Fraser had spent several memorable evenings.
Unlike Victoria, Ray left fingerprints (and the odd dental impression, though that had been in a location from which it was most impractical to retrieve the data).
When Fraser was certain of Ray's identity -- and they were no longer in imminent danger -- he kissed him. "When would you like to go to a game?" he asked. "My schedule is wide open."
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski
Rating: All ages
Word count: 536
Notes:
Fraser was pining for Ray -- and he admitted that to himself -- but every time he got up the courage to kiss him, Ray became enamored of a woman. Fraser started watching hockey games at a bar near his apartment, both to get out of the place and to be somewhere where Ray wasn't; contrary to popular opinion, there's only so much a man can take, even if he does spend his working days in a red suit made of wool and torment.
The theoretically blond man who desultorily tried to start an argument with him over the Oilers and the Hawks wasn't easily defused -- the first time -- but Fraser managed to keep it from coming to one-sided blows. The next game night was two American teams, and he nearly stayed home, but the blond man was there again and offered him his choice of sides and a glass of cranberry juice as well as his name. That he, too, went by Ray was cruel coincidence, little more. That the latter Ray should allow himself to be kissed -- that was kinder coincidence, surely; he had not had enough to drink to be able to blame alcohol for his permissiveness.
Fraser did not have many evenings to himself given his dual employments. Those few that he did have free rarely coincided with hockey games, but the next time he found himself at loose ends, he found Ray likewise, at a table which, after half a season, had begun to feel more like "their" table than might be logically explained.
"Good to see you," Ray said, no accusation in his tone. Nothing but goodwill and acceptance.
He set two tickets on the table. "Ray," Fraser said, reading them upside down.
"Good thing you made it tonight," Ray said.
"I'm afraid I'm going to be busy that night as well." Fraser rubbed his eyebrow. "There's a function at the Consulate I must attend."
Ray rolled his eyes, his blond eyebrows arching. "You'd rather work than see a game with me?" He picked up the tickets again. "I see how it is."
"I'm afraid that at this point, I will be unable to secure the time off," Fraser said.
The faux pas did not inhibit Ray's demonstrative nature later in the evening to any apparent degree.
On the night of the game and the function, Fraser regretted his choice, particularly when the ambassador from Burundi vomited on his boots.
He did not see Ray again despite multiple visits to the bar that they had frequented.
When he returned from Canada, he was most taken aback by the coincidence and endeavored to ascertain Ray's identity, not only to ensure that he was not, in fact, Ray Vecchio, but that he was the same gentleman with whom Fraser had spent several memorable evenings.
Unlike Victoria, Ray left fingerprints (and the odd dental impression, though that had been in a location from which it was most impractical to retrieve the data).
When Fraser was certain of Ray's identity -- and they were no longer in imminent danger -- he kissed him. "When would you like to go to a game?" he asked. "My schedule is wide open."
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Date: 2008-08-08 10:41 am (UTC)...
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*shakes self*
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Date: 2008-08-08 03:14 am (UTC)Oh, FRASER. *g*
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Date: 2008-08-08 11:15 am (UTC)As it was, he rolled over, inadvertently waking Ray.
When they woke again, Fraser got up carefully -- the soreness had gone from pleasant to acute in some areas of his body -- and made his way to the bathroom. He was still fingering the spreading bruise on his neck and waiting for water to boil for tea when Ray got up and came into the kitchen, nude. "Looks like I really gotcha, huh." He traced the edges of the bruise with tender fingers. "Sorry about that."
"It's below the collar line of my uniform," Fraser assured him. "It won't give anything away."
"Yeah?" Ray did a small victory dance that ended with a whirl. "Want another?"
Fraser laughed and caught him in a frame inappropriate for ballroom. "Certainly, if you place it as carefully as the last one."
"I'm always careful with my hickeys," Ray promised him, grinning.
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Date: 2008-08-08 04:27 am (UTC)'...even if he does spend his working days in a red suit made of wool and torment.'
Love your way with words.
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Date: 2008-08-08 07:07 am (UTC)First reaction: "EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEH"
I love this. Mainly because I didn't see it coming. lol
Really good piece! :-)
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Date: 2008-08-08 07:26 am (UTC)Also? oh, BOYS.
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Date: 2008-08-08 11:23 am (UTC)Far more experienced-in-the-fandom people than I have both written and recommended stories that fit this description by the score; if you particularly liked this, check some of them out.
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Date: 2008-08-08 09:33 pm (UTC)Fraser laughed and caught him in a frame inappropriate for ballroom.
That is so perfectly Fraser, I just... Siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh.
It's so great to read something from you where I actually recognise the fandom again! I keep seeing these awesome stories and pouting because I don't know what's going on, and who these people are. *clutches Petra-fic tightly*
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Date: 2008-08-08 10:48 pm (UTC)As to what I've been writing recently, I suspect that you would be edified by an (extended) visit to youTube, beginning, one must suggest, here (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=owfeSoW-DmY).
It might just be the sort of thing you like.
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Date: 2008-08-08 02:19 pm (UTC)Thanks for letting me know which phrases really caught your ear!
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Date: 2008-08-09 12:40 am (UTC)Terrific job, and I know you've got more F/K in you. This is just the beginning! *cackles madly*
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Date: 2008-08-09 02:13 am (UTC)I'm sure that there are niches in dS where I could find that challenge, but I'm more interested in mostly-lurking in the fandom than writing in it at present. I'm far more taken with Slings & Arrows than I am with dS from a writing standpoint. I feel as though I have many more things to say related to that canon which haven't been said yet in a variety of ways. The only drawback to that fandom appears to be the dearth of active fans.
Perhaps I should ask you to come write Geoffrey/Darren. ;)
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Date: 2008-08-11 01:10 pm (UTC)(Wow, there's a whole discussion buried in there about the quality of the original source material, and why I see dS as something easily penetrable and accessible, whereas I'm far too much in awe of S&A to attempt the writing. But that's probably meta for another time :-)
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Date: 2008-08-11 06:50 pm (UTC)Also, I find it much easier to settle in for an evening with, say, Antony and Cleopatra for research purposes than to look up a pile of Inuit myths in order to grok Fraser better. Theater culture isn't my culture, but learning about it feels less like appropriation than borrowing myths would.
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Date: 2008-08-26 02:43 am (UTC)My take is while Fraser actually does understand the "endless Inuit stories" fanon references, nobody else even bothers to listen. I wish this was due to a respectful stance like yours.
A longer example of the "new Ray is an old Ray" trope is First Person Imperfect, which is full of intriguing porny details.
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Date: 2008-08-26 02:49 am (UTC)I'll read the story you've linked when I can keep my eyes open. Thanks!
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Date: 2008-08-10 01:41 am (UTC)Thank you! &hearts
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