[identity profile] petronelle.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] ds_flashfiction
Title: Season Tickets
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski
Rating: All ages
Word count: 536
Notes: [livejournal.com profile] nos4a2no9 asked me for F/K established relationship, and this was what happened. It answers the letter, though not the spirit, of that request.


Fraser was pining for Ray -- and he admitted that to himself -- but every time he got up the courage to kiss him, Ray became enamored of a woman. Fraser started watching hockey games at a bar near his apartment, both to get out of the place and to be somewhere where Ray wasn't; contrary to popular opinion, there's only so much a man can take, even if he does spend his working days in a red suit made of wool and torment.

The theoretically blond man who desultorily tried to start an argument with him over the Oilers and the Hawks wasn't easily defused -- the first time -- but Fraser managed to keep it from coming to one-sided blows. The next game night was two American teams, and he nearly stayed home, but the blond man was there again and offered him his choice of sides and a glass of cranberry juice as well as his name. That he, too, went by Ray was cruel coincidence, little more. That the latter Ray should allow himself to be kissed -- that was kinder coincidence, surely; he had not had enough to drink to be able to blame alcohol for his permissiveness.

Fraser did not have many evenings to himself given his dual employments. Those few that he did have free rarely coincided with hockey games, but the next time he found himself at loose ends, he found Ray likewise, at a table which, after half a season, had begun to feel more like "their" table than might be logically explained.

"Good to see you," Ray said, no accusation in his tone. Nothing but goodwill and acceptance.

He set two tickets on the table. "Ray," Fraser said, reading them upside down.

"Good thing you made it tonight," Ray said.

"I'm afraid I'm going to be busy that night as well." Fraser rubbed his eyebrow. "There's a function at the Consulate I must attend."

Ray rolled his eyes, his blond eyebrows arching. "You'd rather work than see a game with me?" He picked up the tickets again. "I see how it is."

"I'm afraid that at this point, I will be unable to secure the time off," Fraser said.

The faux pas did not inhibit Ray's demonstrative nature later in the evening to any apparent degree.

On the night of the game and the function, Fraser regretted his choice, particularly when the ambassador from Burundi vomited on his boots.

He did not see Ray again despite multiple visits to the bar that they had frequented.

When he returned from Canada, he was most taken aback by the coincidence and endeavored to ascertain Ray's identity, not only to ensure that he was not, in fact, Ray Vecchio, but that he was the same gentleman with whom Fraser had spent several memorable evenings.

Unlike Victoria, Ray left fingerprints (and the odd dental impression, though that had been in a location from which it was most impractical to retrieve the data).

When Fraser was certain of Ray's identity -- and they were no longer in imminent danger -- he kissed him. "When would you like to go to a game?" he asked. "My schedule is wide open."

Date: 2008-08-08 01:40 am (UTC)
sage: Still of Natasha Romanova from Iron Man 2 (ds: fraser swings round)
From: [personal profile] sage
Awww, BOYS!! ♥

Date: 2008-08-08 10:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lurkslikefox.livejournal.com
Your icon is hypnotic...
...
...
*shakes self*

Date: 2008-08-08 03:14 am (UTC)
ext_3190: Red icon with logo "I drink Nozz-a-la- Cola" in cursive. (dS: fraserhat)
From: [identity profile] primroseburrows.livejournal.com
(and the odd dental impression, though that had been in a location from which it was most impractical to retrieve the data).


Oh, FRASER. *g*

Date: 2008-08-08 10:00 pm (UTC)
jadelennox: due South: Fraser's leg and Diefenbaker (due south: fraser leg and dief)
From: [personal profile] jadelennox
What she said!

Date: 2008-08-08 04:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] love-jackianto.livejournal.com
Oh that was cute.

'...even if he does spend his working days in a red suit made of wool and torment.'
Love your way with words.

Date: 2008-08-08 05:17 am (UTC)
ext_9063: (due South Stanley)
From: [identity profile] mlyn.livejournal.com
Ooo, interesting twist on S2!

Date: 2008-08-08 07:07 am (UTC)
ext_24067: (dS rayK-geek)
From: [identity profile] wihluta.livejournal.com
"When would you like to go to a game?" he asked. "My schedule is wide open."
First reaction: "EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEH"

I love this. Mainly because I didn't see it coming. lol
Really good piece! :-)

Date: 2008-08-08 07:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomedet.livejournal.com
Your Fraser voice is spot on. His turns of phrase here made me grin like a grinning thing.

Also? oh, BOYS.

Date: 2008-08-08 10:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lurkslikefox.livejournal.com
That was really nice. Y'know, I'm not sure I've ever read a fic from Frasers POV. What a nice way to start.

Date: 2008-08-08 11:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] askmehow.livejournal.com
AWWWWWWWWW!

Date: 2008-08-08 09:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] askmehow.livejournal.com
And it's SO SHINY!

Fraser laughed and caught him in a frame inappropriate for ballroom.
That is so perfectly Fraser, I just... Siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh.

It's so great to read something from you where I actually recognise the fandom again! I keep seeing these awesome stories and pouting because I don't know what's going on, and who these people are. *clutches Petra-fic tightly*

Date: 2008-08-08 11:19 am (UTC)
eledhwenlin: (Default)
From: [personal profile] eledhwenlin
Awwwwwwww. I LOVE this. (I love stories where Fraser and RayK meet during the first two seasons. :D)

Date: 2008-08-08 04:52 pm (UTC)
eledhwenlin: (Default)
From: [personal profile] eledhwenlin
There aren't very many of them, but I've read some. I'll try to remember the names and get back to you with some links.

Date: 2008-08-08 11:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mizzmarvel.livejournal.com
Aw, I love this.

Date: 2008-08-08 02:16 pm (UTC)
ext_3554: dream wolf (Default)
From: [identity profile] keerawa.livejournal.com
a red suit made of wool and torment Oooh, nice phrase. I love the idea of Ray trying to start a fight with Fraser ovr hockey the first time they meet. the odd dental impression, though that had been in a location from which it was most impractical to retrieve the data *snickers*

Date: 2008-08-09 12:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nos4a2no9.livejournal.com
Oh, DUDE! I had kind of hoped to inspire greatness (or at least more established relationship fic) and this was terrific. Times a thousand. The twist was so clever, so unexpected, that I kind of gasped when the turn came, and I'll echo everyone above: you have a fantastic way with words. Your Fraser voice? Perfect. In fact, I want to steal it. You've got such a deft hand for nailing that exact blend of Fraser's intellectual distance and eccentric stuffiness with dry humour and romantic longing. It's a perfect blend, and I loved the way his relationship with Ray played out.

Terrific job, and I know you've got more F/K in you. This is just the beginning! *cackles madly*

Date: 2008-08-11 01:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nos4a2no9.livejournal.com
Hah! I really don't think I'd be capable of Geoffrey/Darren. It would break my tiny mind. I understand what you mean, about being taken with a particular show from a writing standpoint. I adore S&A, but it intimidates the shit out of me. Those characters are all amazing and weird and wonderful, and their world (and their passion for it) is so totally beyond my own experience. I can only come at S&A sideways, like through a dS crossover, or via that Billy Talent/Geoffrey fic. I don't think I'm good enough to write a S&A fic, frankly. I admire the hell out of people who take it on.

(Wow, there's a whole discussion buried in there about the quality of the original source material, and why I see dS as something easily penetrable and accessible, whereas I'm far too much in awe of S&A to attempt the writing. But that's probably meta for another time :-)

Date: 2008-08-26 02:43 am (UTC)
jesse_the_k: Pipe from Magritte's Treachery of Images captioned "this is not an icon" (f/k poker)
From: [personal profile] jesse_the_k
...feels less like appropriation

My take is while Fraser actually does understand the "endless Inuit stories" fanon references, nobody else even bothers to listen. I wish this was due to a respectful stance like yours.

A longer example of the "new Ray is an old Ray" trope is First Person Imperfect, which is full of intriguing porny details.

Date: 2008-08-10 01:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mergatrude.livejournal.com
Oh, lovely! I adored this, and also the little outtake you added in the comments.

Thank you! &hearts

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