S'okay. It's taken me weeks to get back here and finish replying to all the comments.
Thanks for letting me know which was the unreadable scene for you.
I hear you. Yes, there's a lot of realism in that scene, and it makes sense it would be tough to read for some people, on some days, etc. Thanks for what you said, though. I appreciate that so much. Evoking emotions is exactly what I'm trying to do.
Hee, about the Ultimate Meal. My green swamp juice is called Exsula, but, yeah, same idea. Tastes wonderful in orange juice (the premium not-from-concentrate kind). And looks vile and possibly sentient. Hee! I love that description.
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Date: 2008-10-25 04:52 am (UTC)Thanks for letting me know which was the unreadable scene for you.
I hear you. Yes, there's a lot of realism in that scene, and it makes sense it would be tough to read for some people, on some days, etc. Thanks for what you said, though. I appreciate that so much. Evoking emotions is exactly what I'm trying to do.
Hee, about the Ultimate Meal. My green swamp juice is called Exsula, but, yeah, same idea. Tastes wonderful in orange juice (the premium not-from-concentrate kind). And looks vile and possibly sentient. Hee! I love that description.
Thank you again. :)