[identity profile] karra.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] ds_flashfiction
Well...maybe not had to. But...yeah, I'm sorry. *G*

First post. Be kind.



"Baasudei"
EA Karras
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*ring*

No. I won't answer. I won't die like that. I love you, Frase, but I will /not/ die like that. Not for you, not for anyone.

*ring*

I don't think you meant for me to see...that. God, I hope to hell you didn't. I don't think I could live, knowing that you wanted me to...that you left that for /me.

*ring*

Shut up! Go away! Stop calling, I /won't/ answer. If I don't answer, it won't get me. So I just won't fucking answer.

*ring!*

Damn you, Fraser. Why did you have to do that? You had to have known I'd see it. Were you counting on me seeing it sooner? You had to have known! God....

*ring*

I feel sick. I remember how you look when you died, Frase, and I feel sick. I don't want to die like that.

*ring*

Why?

*ring*

I don't want to leave you alone.

*ring*

I don't want to be alone.

*ring*

No one will ever love me like you did.

*ring!*

Why did you do this to me?

*ring!*

I'm so sorry.

*RING!!*

*click*

"Seven days..."

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Date: 2003-06-06 03:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubyrosered.livejournal.com
Oh. Oh. Oh. Oh. OH!!

Okay, the first time I read this, I honestly didn't get it. Then, I was looking back through and all of a sudden it clicked!

I think you're right - it had to be done. It's perfect, actually!

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