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[identity profile] heuradys.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] ds_flashfiction
I have no idea what the actual word count is, but it's not long - and it comes with a sequel that should be done by Monday. (The link does take you off LJ, but I had a hard enough time keeping the coding functional without trying to do it here, too.)

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Date: 2003-06-19 09:53 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] doll-revolution.livejournal.com
that was really, really funny.

^____^
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Date: 2003-06-19 11:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jenboo.livejournal.com
okay, that rocks just for the inventiveness of it. And it's really funny besides. Really great!

Date: 2003-06-19 11:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cesperanza.livejournal.com
clap, clap, clap, clap!!!! Our first real form! COOOL! Definite bonus points to you--and I loved the rubber duckies (17,000 worth???) and the difficulties of getting past receptionist. *g*

Date: 2003-06-20 12:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maubast.livejournal.com
That's so damn awesome!

Date: 2003-06-20 01:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amadyce.livejournal.com
Cool idea. An actual document. I really liked this. Very funny with the rubber duckies.

Date: 2003-06-20 03:07 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] theodosia.livejournal.com
Err... if you watch the episode very carefully (not that I have or anything), the rubber duckies are there!

Absolutely love it. Does everybody understand how much you have to fiddle with HTML to get this many boxes -- the formatting itself is worth a round of applause!

Date: 2003-06-20 03:26 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] lamardeuse.livejournal.com
That is such a neat idea! Great job.

Date: 2003-06-20 06:10 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] beledibabe.livejournal.com
Brava! What a tour de force of formatting and humour. ::wild applause::

Date: 2003-06-20 06:51 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] shayheyred.livejournal.com
Wowie! I shudder to ask this, but are you an insurance adjuster in real life, because this was so perfect and so hilarious, with spot-on terminology. And I'm willing to bet the claim gets denied. ("Rubber duckies? Greta Garbo? Performance Arsonist?" Wait a minute, buster --")
Just greatness, greatness.

Date: 2003-06-20 06:54 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Fabulous!

Describe Property
Shipping container full of rubber duckies


That's really inspired :-)

Date: 2003-06-20 07:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ajinamoto.livejournal.com
Okay, I just had to deal with some insurance certificates for one of our hotels and when I saw that "ACORD" up in the corner I did a doubletake.

Brava! Yeah, like this claim isn't going to be flagged for further investigation.
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Date: 2003-06-20 08:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brooklinegirl.livejournal.com
oh my god. This is so incredibly clever and funny as hell. I can just imagine the broker that has to deal with this particular claim. This is my favorite:
IV, which was on fire, purposely driven into Lake Michigan. Bravo! Wonderful!

Date: 2003-06-20 11:07 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] akite.livejournal.com
Just wanted to chime in with my gosh-wows. Very clever and funny.

Date: 2003-06-21 02:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ardent-muses.livejournal.com
That was hysterical! Extremely inventive. :)

Just when I thought you'd milked it for all it was worth, I hit the part about getting past the receptionist. Great job!

(I didn't notice the duckies for the first five or six times I saw the ep. I must be extremely dim. *G* Now they're my favorite thing about the scene.)

bwah ha ha HA!

Date: 2003-06-22 09:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kormantic.livejournal.com
So. Great. The visual totally made it.

Date: 2003-06-23 08:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rowanfairchild.livejournal.com
This was so cool! What a great idea, and loved all the details in execution. Can't wait to see the sequel!

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