please

Jul. 2nd, 2003 02:57 pm
axiom_of_stripe: DC Comics: Kory cries "X'Hal!" (Mask)
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because goddammit i need a palate cleanser, and also i'm tired of waiting until the last minute every week.

*****

Courtesy Double-drabble: With a cherry on top

Elaine liked Frannie, she really did, but she had strong doubts about her qualifications to work in a police station, even in (Elaine hated to admit this) a fairly unimportant role such as Civilian Aide. Frannie was determined, though, and she did say please. Please please please pretty please pleeeeeeease with a cherry on top, and finally Elaine threw her hands in the air and agreed.

Frannie promptly took them both out for celebratory frozen yogurt to celebrate. Elaine preferred real ice cream, usually, but Frannie said pleeeeeeease again and offered a cherry and whipped cream on top, so Elaine sighed and went along to Frannie's favorite frozen yogurt stand. It turned out to be really good.

Elaine brought along some employment paperwork for Frannie, so they went back to Frannie's house afterward. Frannie touched up her lipstick and stuck the tip of her tongue out of her mouth as she neatly filled in her application. Then she led Elaine up into her bedroom, hiked her skirt up high enough to show off a lack of panties, and pulled a dumbstruck Elaine down onto the pink-and-white-quilted bed. "Please," she whispered, so sweetly and politely that Elaine just couldn't refuse her.

END

Date: 2003-07-02 12:36 pm (UTC)
helvirago: (Default)
From: [personal profile] helvirago
This was great! Thank you!

(But can't Elaine at least get whipped cream with the last part?)

Date: 2003-07-02 06:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jenboo.livejournal.com
I'm with Hel! We know Elaine's not getting a cherry, so she could at least get a little whipped cream. *G*

Thanks for the yummy summer treat!

Date: 2003-07-02 06:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cesperanza.livejournal.com
This is a perfect summer treat--all pink and luscious like, er, Frannie's bedspread, like a summer strawberry. (Whew.)

Date: 2003-07-03 08:01 am (UTC)

Date: 2003-07-03 09:50 am (UTC)
ext_3548: (silhouette)
From: [identity profile] shayheyred.livejournal.com
Sweet and funny and very charming. And, as you say, a palate cleanser after all the boy/boy and boy/girl hijinks of the last few challenges. Brava!

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